shofs , that is so tight

 

tell me what you think did it very quick...

 

you dont have a single aeroe in that......

 

?

 

needs more aeroes. duh

 

needs more eggrolls.

 

eggrolls is what i meant to say. yur rite

 

Hate, that would be good if the shadow wasnt so fucked up

 

Hate that looks good

 

So crits?

 

Looks like it says eeik... Don't do that bump on the right side of the first E is does not need it... the squared edge on the i does not go with the rounded style. props for having the same letter sizing through out the toss. keep at it my dude

 

worried that the D looks like an O... Gonna have to work on that and a a lot more.

 

yeah, looks like nero. and that N is way bigger than the other letters.

 

nerd that is horrible... slow down man

 

Thanks Weedeater and MoganOne. I totally agree. I need to take a step back.

 

Thanks ya it says epic but i'll deff ditch the squared edge and make the p bigger, all while keeping the size the same .

 

First one a one liner for a name im messing with "Debs' second one throwie for my name.

 

dude your first throw looks like it says "jels". the secong one, ur a doesnt look like anything, also dont forget to add the slitts on your letters with openings, like ur b's

 

One liners are lame anyways, yo.