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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. whosthisguy

    whosthisguy Senior Member

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  2. crevette

    crevette Member

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    ohsnap - LOL

    depo - the d looks like a y, e is ugh, especially that character's gotta go, p looks ok apart from that top part. the 0 looks more like a d.

    nesk - the s is the only aright thing. That k needs mad work. what's that second letter?
     
  3. Nesk1

    Nesk1 Senior Member

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    It says SIEK
     
  4. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Messed up on both of them
    ai33.tinypic.com_eqcokk.jpg
    ai37.tinypic.com_kcxaxi.gif

    haha ohsnap that chicks got a madddd tan line
    Still though props :)

    Dude under me that's more of a piece than a throw
     
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  5. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    yarbles i like the style
    onsnap lol

    new lil sharpie toy crits?
    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y150_cruzchuy_08_19_08_1654.jpg
     
  6. dj3hac

    dj3hac Senior Member

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    for just starting out thats quite good, i like how you were able to connect everything. The N is a bit off though
     
  7. crevette

    crevette Member

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    nesk - make that look like an i.
    yarbles - second one is better. Still that k's right leg looks sketchy. It's too skinny. Try to do it all in sharpie, because those inside outlines don't look so clean.
    bak - i like the color and the fill but that u is mega odd and the letters at the end are fatter than the ones in the beginning. Some of that 3d doesn't make sense either go up and down at the same time.

    I don't really stick to one style. Repeating one style would make it... boring. It's probably not a good idea though...

    [Broken External Image]:http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8853/scan0004vo3.jpg
     
  8. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    pas thats not a throw
     
  9. whosthisguy

    whosthisguy Senior Member

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    crits?
     
  10. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Give crits to get crits.
     
  11. crevette

    crevette Member

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  12. whosthisguy

    whosthisguy Senior Member

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    there's been nothing to crit since i've posted?
     
  13. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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    frsh letter for a good lookin gurl from this angle haha dope shit snap
     
  14. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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    dude there is no way you have been writing for four years. n do stuff like that.... you need alot of work on you letter structure...style...fills...handstyle...etc... just go to the new to graff thread learn sum stuff...your throwies are ight but ur other stuff is hella toy ish...not started beef but seriously...
     
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  15. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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  16. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    i like that k the r needs some work on the top, and the o is a little plain, but then again its an o so theres only so much you could do with it, where the drop shadow at?
     
  17. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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  18. beefisforburgers

    beefisforburgers Senior Member

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    ai262.photobucket.com_albums_ii104_beefisforburgers_HPIM0713.jpg

    Here's a fillin and drop shadow,the yellow one is mine.
     
  19. Hoaks

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8932/image085pe4.th.jpg
    Click for size ;)
    well everyone here is 10x above my level so my crits probably aren't worth much, but I'll play by the rules and give it a go.
    Ohsnap, looks sick I really don't know what to crit, maybe make the left leg of the H a bit fatter? nice girl too.
    beef, Oh wait, it's an A not an r >.< Looks dope :)
    sorry for the shit crits
     
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  20. VoyR

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    Another thing I'm not liking is how u do the upper inside part of the R, Id change the horizontal line to a vertical one. Maybe try curve it a bit so it follows the flow of the outer line of the R as well, I'd also lower the line that makes the two legs of the r a bit. ... :p Toy critz