By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.
Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
ohsnap - LOL
depo - the d looks like a y, e is ugh, especially that character's gotta go, p looks ok apart from that top part. the 0 looks more like a d.
nesk - the s is the only aright thing. That k needs mad work. what's that second letter?
It says SIEK
Messed up on both of them
haha ohsnap that chicks got a madddd tan line
Still though props
Dude under me that's more of a piece than a throw
yarbles i like the style
new lil sharpie toy crits?
for just starting out thats quite good, i like how you were able to connect everything. The N is a bit off though
nesk - make that look like an i.
yarbles - second one is better. Still that k's right leg looks sketchy. It's too skinny. Try to do it all in sharpie, because those inside outlines don't look so clean.
bak - i like the color and the fill but that u is mega odd and the letters at the end are fatter than the ones in the beginning. Some of that 3d doesn't make sense either go up and down at the same time.
I don't really stick to one style. Repeating one style would make it... boring. It's probably not a good idea though...
[Broken External Image]:http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8853/scan0004vo3.jpg
pas thats not a throw
Give crits to get crits.
aight, my bad.
there's been nothing to crit since i've posted?
frsh letter for a good lookin gurl from this angle haha dope shit snap
dude there is no way you have been writing for four years. n do stuff like that.... you need alot of work on you letter structure...style...fills...handstyle...etc... just go to the new to graff thread learn sum stuff...your throwies are ight but ur other stuff is hella toy ish...not started beef but seriously...
New hollow yo, critz?
i like that k the r needs some work on the top, and the o is a little plain, but then again its an o so theres only so much you could do with it, where the drop shadow at?
Thats not an R its an A.
Here's a fillin and drop shadow,the yellow one is mine.
[Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8932/image085pe4.th.jpg
Click for size
well everyone here is 10x above my level so my crits probably aren't worth much, but I'll play by the rules and give it a go.
Ohsnap, looks sick I really don't know what to crit, maybe make the left leg of the H a bit fatter? nice girl too.
beef, Oh wait, it's an A not an r >.< Looks dope
sorry for the shit crits
Another thing I'm not liking is how u do the upper inside part of the R, Id change the horizontal line to a vertical one. Maybe try curve it a bit so it follows the flow of the outer line of the R as well, I'd also lower the line that makes the two legs of the r a bit. ... Toy critz
Separate names with a comma.