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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
axi l- dont paint yet..stay on paper
nah, fuck that, paint all you want. no one here really gives a shit either way.
any crits on this
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thats not so bad, but:
- a general rule for throwups is to keep all of you letters the same size, and i suggest that you observe it.
- although your e is decent, it looks goofy because of the much smaller n and a.
- the little point you have on the top left of all your letters looks gay, with the exception of the the e. the e looks like it has horns or some shit.
-the bump on the bottom of your D (yes, i know) wouldnt look so bad if it connected with the rest of the letter
word, hope this helps.
@Dane the Bottom round part of the D and the round part of the a look off. Keep workin with it.
My first throwie concept, any tips for cleaning it up, want to go paint tonite.
you seem pretty gung-ho on the "sharp" edges, but it think it would look better with more curves. like so.
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just a suggestion.
oh, and good luck not getting caught!
Thanks for the tip good man, i'll work with it.
I love the concept but could use some definition on the S and E. Some lines for the holes maybe too.
Trying to clean it up, these are all quick concept sketches so they aren't very clean. Also ignore the shite tag. That need's work and i'm well aware haha.
Any tips on making the D in this one look less like an O?
I'm actually really digging this, and the one before it with the blue outline.
Pass second one is much better
2 slaps i did out of boredom.
pase - that shits awesome keep at it. i would say try to tweak the s some but your progression should be quick
cred - those stickers are nice. try to make your R more noticeable
cred your sig is killin me
ahh to fuckin high
SO - throw some drop shadow on that
Pase: That shit is dope. I love the loseness of it.
Cred: you're covering ground quick. Keep rockin.
Killroy: Looking good stay up.
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