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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    corfu.jpg for the weekly battle. crits?
     
  2. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    For fuck sake... Yes thats toy. Theres no proper structure to the letters, the 3D is off, theres parts of the 3D missing, that face in the what looks like it could be a H is awful and unnecessary. All the little drawings around it are bad, the "buds inc" is all out of proportion. There is nothing right about this.. Go to the "new to graffiti" thread and start again.

    That corfu looks all right. The C doesn't look right to me and it looks a bit rigid. The top half has a nice flow though. Not bad
     
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  3. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    that's buds ind. If you don't know what toy means.... google it, ask some one, do some research.... learn some history. for real... TBS Can I get some crits from you on that Corfu?
     
  4. TBS

    TBS Senior Member

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    Yeah, as i said the top of it has some decent rhythm and flow but the bottom half seems quite rigid. The problem with the C is that line in the middle comes down too far. The O and U aren't too bad but personally i'd bring it up a bit. The R looks a bit like an A, again i would move that line in the middle over a bit, just to make it look more like an R. And with the U, just make that last little bit a bit thicker. Other than that its not a bad attempt.
     
  5. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    peter looks good, only thing i can say is the C looks a little bit like a G and with ur U maybe just have it a straight line coming downt he middle or somthing..looking good though dude

    intout go more simple and like the others said check out the new to graff thread
     
  7. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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  8. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    Yeahhhh.. you should just kill yourself if you've been writing since 07 and thats all you can do.
     
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  9. SicK-

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  10. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    word i wasnt baked enough toys are asshole faggots got you
     
  11. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    i like the letters ecepts the T in WETM is getting a bit wonky.
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    hipe that throw is dope i dig it

    werm i like those 2 throws, i dont really like that little swirl into the R though but thats just me
     
  13. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    i think we should could toys GROMs like grominate from calgary expet just groms:D toy sounds odd to me.
     
  14. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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  16. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    maybe try messing around with a capital R or somshit, those E's r dope
    in the bottom pic the right side of your W kinda looks like a lower case R cuz ur line came in close to the middle of the W...if u look at it in that way, could be a cool lower case R to use
     
  17. SneeZ

    SneeZ Senior Member

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    kaze said it all ^^

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    hopin to get some feedback
     

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  18. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    crits?

    sneez - i like your letters and style but what do you write?
     
  19. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    damn those r dope sneez, realy digging the trask and akers in the second last picture..black and chrome one is nice 2

    quickie its gettin better, E there looks off, the bottom inside part of it is to fat if u get wat im saying, just keep working at it
     
  20. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    I get you, any advice?