Im a fan of the cursive style man, accents on the o's are cool too. Personally i think theres a little too much overlap on the first letter, i cant quite tell what it is lon

 

I like it. The only thing i'd say to do would be to get rid of the halo, as it looks a bit out of place. Also, there are separate forums for crits (tags, throwies, blackbooks, etc) so chuck your shit in there.

 

That's good dude. You should try it with specialized markers. Go watch some alphabets and develop your own style.