for a battle

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wrek - you need to make everything a lot simpler and use bars

 

A lot of things that I don't like about this one,
but what are you gonna do?



Definitely not feeling it, wrek.

klic, I don't think that the C, E, or middle of the M need the little boxes at the bottom.

 

^ i just put them on all of the letters to add a little extra flow to them so it was either on all or none of them

and i could see that earn piece looking pretty nice if all the letters were the same width and all

 

Yeah, like said, I thought the outcome itself was shit, I just like the style of the letters.

 

Did This Quik Tryin A New Name Kons
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fucked up at the very button dont mind it

 

Sum colored simps crits

 

I've got plenty more, but this is the only one i have a pic of right now. More on the way....

 

The colors are all over the place, the O shouldn't be tucked behind the K so much, the I and N really don't need those kinks at the bottom, and you should try to make the bars the same width, instead of tapering them.

Other than that, it has alot of potential.

Also, give them to get them, guys.

 

Yeah, thanks, that's good advice.
I've done alot more than that, I think that was my first simple. More coming up soon though.

 

more simps...

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half done
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crits...

kofin - whats with the colors lol and make the letters the same width

silent - still, go simpler

kons - the shadows off in a lot of places

edit: and yah what bigblue said... GIVE CRITS IF YOU WANT TO RECEIVE THEM!

 

wrek- new to graff thread
klic- your letters are looking alot better much cleaner/more equal bars.
big blue- just what you said but i would get a whole new n
the rest of you read the new to graff thread too.

 

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Some Crits? The coloring sucks since I did it on the bus to work.

 

give em to get em

 

asik??

 

anteater-cant quite tell what the first letter is (i think its a p)
work on make the thickness of your bars the same throughout the entire piece and your
3d is way off. and next time give crits to get them.

 

the highlights dont make sense either

 

wasnt sure if you'd consider this a simple


crits?

 

Yo here's those other pics i promised, although it's from a crappy webcam.

 

really liking them Kofin