Zane id space ur N an E out better an make the letters more of the same size.,

heres a simp i think if i made it a lil bigger it would turned out better but crits?

 

i know but all my pens are all out off ink so and i know good schemes like black white and red and shit
laturr

 

hey shpel i ahv a simple for u that did foran exchange. completely forgot about it. ill post it later if u want.

this is for snarl. but it also goes out to all u newbies out there. dont jump into graffiti. sketch letters like they appear on your keyboard. and once you've done that. do it again. and again. and again. keep doin it. until u see urself drawing letters on the backs of your eyelids wen u close ur eyes. just destroy entire reams of paper.

its a messy sketch, but it dusnt matter. its for the basic idea. remember to use bars people. and start simple!

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EDIT: R is a BITCH!

 

tRy again... look at otheR's R's and get some influances..

 

lol its fine. i dont hav an r in my name. il get an r wen i need one. thats just wat it looks like on the keyboard

 

yah tempest that would be good if you could post that sometime, you saw mine right(you write dask dont you)?

 

something i did in school.. new name i started writing today..critz

 

widen up your s

 

yeah i need to learn how to get my s structures down better...tough letter for a beginner

 

yeh it is. but its good to see straight letters bro. this is how you will improve.

@shpel. yeh i rite dask/dank/kard. heres my side of it. sorrry bro, i was drunk wen i sketched it (mayb y i forgot about it).

Dave Shpel:
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crits i kno the k is fuked but op well n the simp above me is pretty nice id like to c dat on a wall

 

critzz

 

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im aware the Y is wack. i ran out of yellow and couldnt fix it.but fuck excuses.
sike, for the S, make the top of it not overlap the body. and dont make you letters so wiggly. do that and itlle be hot, work on that k a bit too.
bias, give crits to get crits...

 

i would give critz but i dont like to do it to higher skill levels like yourself.. other then that i am down to give em to get em

 

sike keep workig with bars..make everything the same width

 

bias:add some shadow or shade or somethin cause the black looks wack
the letters are good maybe a bit to thin

 

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fuck you dank

you say that you only give crits to lower skill levels but youre skill level under null man so shut te fuck up and work on youre letters

 

mtown seems to really like me... wow even a sig post with me... and a fuck u dank on the topp wow.. even tho i haven't said anything bad.. okay mtown lets seem some of your amazing artwork