zane get funky and try new style...sphel keep it up lookin good and snarl letters look crispy and that moon is tightt..word

 

i disagree, the only way he'll improve faster is to keep doing simples until you can make them look good, ive been doing simples since i started writing, like 3 months ago and im still not rready to move on

ohh and thanks for the crit dank

 

Ive been doing simples for a good year before i stopped and for the past two months after my 3 month heinous.

 

when i ment new style i was referring to diff simps.. like straight letters.. adding those slight little tweak can make or break yaaa dig.. i am not telling him to try a burner, peice or something. just something other than his rounded letters.. he asks for crits on the same style everytime and all we can say is make it crispy and your good.. all i am saying is zane i dig te bubble letter but branch out a little bit and try straight keyboard letters or adding a slight curve here and there and have it all even and such.. and sorry for the paragraph lol

 

also zane i was wondering if you sketch out your simps or just use a marker and free hand it

 

new name . . stickin with this one i swear...critzz thanks in advance

 

10min in math class...
thinkin bout putin this on a roof top...
wut you guys think?

 

i mostly take a marker with the fill color and then make bars with it and shit
but now i'm doing more with a pencil



this looks 100 times better then the dank ones

 

thanks man.. yeah dude sketchin with a pencil first helps alot, you can make mistakes and fix it unlike just using a markers.. keep at it

 

youve been writing for a year? lmao

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leaf - keep doing simples bro youll get there

pk - i wouldnt put that on a rooftop yet, stick to the books for a little longer

crits...

 

leaf simp..
critz

sphel i like the shi..has good bars with even widths, keep at it

 

cool man, why do you sucked so with the dank ones this are cool

are other people from here on that veryangrytoad forum?or got a pm from mexicali???

 

leaf- nice lines, wouldnt really tilt the letters though.

shpel- on the error simp, i dunno what makes it look wierd, might be the slant. i dunno. but good job. and on your shpel ones, i wouldnt curve the second h leg

good job though guys

 

dank: do you use a ruler?

 

nopee...need to learn to make straight lines without it

 

sup guys, first time on here, lemme know what you think

 

the bottom pic looks like you bit the letters of learrngraffiti.net
http://learngraffiti.net/graffiti_alphabets.htm - number 5

 

oh yeah i looked at that right before i did it lol, but it wasn't intentional

 

zane- Some of the letters look too obese. Like the mid bar of the Z.
Luca-New to graff thread.
ERROR-Looks pretty good. Just cleaner lines. Keep at it.
Leaf-good block letters. Bright force field will help define the letters more.
PK-The upper K leg doesn't match with the P.