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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by crystalmeth and abortions, Apr 6, 2008.

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  1. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    Zane- not too bad, make that Z a little thinner so it fits in with the other letters.

    Saje- I don't like the S, but I think the rest is dope. Make the S more curved in the middle.

    Twix- bring the letters closer together. Maybe look at other people's shit and bite their T's W's I's and X's and put them all together. Then start changing it into your own shit.

    I think my G came out shitty. Crits on the letter structure?
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  2. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    the R is worse. fix the R. but the bars is a good start.
     
  3. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    I like the R....kina of how mine look. Mind you my new steeze as been failing...so it is probably the opposite of what i think.
     
  4. mtown

    mtown Banned

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    guys the pic underneath my text isn't as entry but just as sig!
     
  5. klic

    klic Elite Member

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  6. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    Thanks for all the crits. I'll fix that shit up.

    Shpel- I guess you summed it up pretty much. Aside from the sketchiness, it looks fine to me. I think you should add some shit to it.
     
  7. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    by adding shit to it do you mean attachments or what?
     
  8. FLIP FLOP

    FLIP FLOP Senior Member

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    zane- change your z and e
    aegr- fix your r and making your bars more equal in width wouldnt hurt either.
    klic- just keep practicing and try to make the lines cleaner.
     
  9. aesopjux

    aesopjux Member

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    klic- try and draw straighter lines.
    zane- try and make all the letters proportional. the "z" is huge.


    Crits??

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  10. Anyone

    Anyone Member

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    THanks for tha crits
    GYSE- looks dope...jus work on the R
    AES-I dig the philly hands at the bottom, but is it HAD or AAD?either way that cross bar on the first letter is a lil off
     
  11. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    Super simple, mad bored in economics class...


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  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    sooooooooo dope.

    i dont like the deadspace under your M though. i find it throws it off.
     
  13. RekoFromGeico

    RekoFromGeico Senior Member

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  14. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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    reko- that shit is on piont like an arrow. keep it up

    josh- thats amazing.... lol


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    crits please!!!!
     
  15. RekoFromGeico

    RekoFromGeico Senior Member

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    i like it homie, just erase the bar marks.
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    just a lil handy, and a left hand straight letter

    EDIT&&&
    LOL, i use to work at a factory that printed coupons, etc.
    and we were making these 75c off cig coupons, and i was like fuck it; i was on my break so i went into breakrom and hit one up
    and i put it back on the motionbelt
    and small world it is, it was at 711, the one on the top of every other. i was like WOW, only fucked up thing was it has finger print shit all over it because i put it on the belt while it was wet.
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  16. joshthesk8ter5

    joshthesk8ter5 Senior Member

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    graff i like it. just erase the inside
     
  17. Masta T

    Masta T Senior Member

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  18. dont=play=ketchup

    dont=play=ketchup Senior Member

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  19. mtown

    mtown Banned

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    nlis:i should search another name i think it isn't a good combo of letters it doesn't flow,the s isn;t a simple letter(keyboard)
     
  20. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    sike - fix your I and K nice coloring tho.
    ketchup - new to graff thread.. i see your shit everywhere u just dont listen to crits dog.