Zane- not too bad, make that Z a little thinner so it fits in with the other letters. Saje- I don't like the S, but I think the rest is dope. Make the S more curved in the middle. Twix- bring the letters closer together. Maybe look at other people's shit and bite their T's W's I's and X's and put them all together. Then start changing it into your own shit. I think my G came out shitty. Crits on the letter structure?