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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by crystalmeth and abortions, Apr 6, 2008.

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  1. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    The shit on your first pic looks legit... But the rest is not so fresh : )
     
  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  3. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    ight thanks ill keep working on it
     
  4. dubbed

    dubbed Senior Member

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    mone that M is kinda iffy lol. but i really like your N
     
  5. Res-tooth Slims

    Res-tooth Slims Senior Member

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    yea ^
    the m is av...n is nice...and if your going to do a connection like the 'N'>'E' one either do it for all the letters or none at all...(with some exceptions of course)
     
  6. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Lol yeah I need to work on this rounded M... But thanks my man
     
  7. enseR

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  8. GnarR

    GnarR Member

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    lose the arrow.
     
  9. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    started this 1, then came back to it and did the c-h, turned out lookin like shit
     

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  10. XCES

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    reach_ im just going to say the one most obvious and important thing. the C needs to fill out the space to its left a little better, not such a gap from the a
     
  11. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^ o yup all the letters are close to each other then the c spaces the h away from the rest
    its ballpoint pen, once i started the top of the c like that there was no turning back
     
  12. Lado

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    Let me know what you think. All crits are appreciated :)
     
  13. weedeater

    weedeater Senior Member

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    that A in the second one needs to be taller
     
  14. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    lado- the 2nd pic is a ice little simple looks clean, and the 3d is on point
     
  15. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Lado that first pic is garbagey. The second one is nice except the cross bar of the A should be thicker.
    Reach i dont think the CH really flows, especially the c.
     
  16. JesterOner

    JesterOner Member

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    mone; straight up fire but the m's a bit weird....
    ense; nice letters but i dont like the arrow.
    rib; dont like the r-e connection or the c
    lado; 2nd one it aiiite
    sbane; as i said in toybook bar consistency and the top of the e is slanting down too much.

    critz?
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  17. massacreman

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    last summer in france
     
  18. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    my bad about the blurry pic, god damn web cam camera sucks dick
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  19. ironcrack

    ironcrack Senior Member

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    every thing in here needs more aeroe's
     
  20. Gosk FYA

    Gosk FYA Member

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    trying to get as much criticism and advice as possible..

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