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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by crystalmeth and abortions, Apr 6, 2008.

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  1. weedeater

    weedeater Senior Member

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    your G needs to be more proportionate at the bottom so its the same size as the rest of the letters. that being said, your drop shadow looks good on the right side of the word, but lacks on the G. it should be easier to make it look right if you fix that G.
     
  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    The drop shadow on the second one's K kills it... Not bad tho I like the second pics "S"
    Do it like this
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  3. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  4. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    Mone i like that waay more then your other stuff, you should mess around with that some more, and the right bar of your N looks kinda fucked
     
  5. Gosk FYA

    Gosk FYA Member

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    il note that down.. also, got another, improvement?
    (i need some better sketching pens)
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  6. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    looks legit. any pen should do
     
  7. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    Mone and Gosk those are both fresh... Gosk just make do with what youve got man... pen doesnt matter too much at the end of the day unless its for colour schemes etc.
     
  8. _BEAR_

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    Just started last week. Can i get some crit please.
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  9. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    For one, LUKE, don't write your name on your work, and then post it on the internet. This is kind of similar to putting your hand on a hot stove, ya dig? I know you don't want to burn your hand...so don't put it on the stove.

    Secondly, I feel like I've read this sentence 500 times on this forum, but DO KEYBOARD LETTERS. So, it should look like this BEAR. Work on proportions, and structure, and then onto the color schemes and 3d.
     
  10. ironcrack

    ironcrack Senior Member

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    keep rockin the bottom one. dont listen to these fags talk about keyboard letters and bars
     
  11. spek.

    spek. Member

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    the more and more i look at it i dont like the bits on the E..crits?
     

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  12. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    Tesm? thats definity work on your spacing and fuck with a differnt style that one isnt working to well for you
     
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  14. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Tesm not likin S.
     
  15. H1P30N3R

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  18. Lado

    Lado Senior Member

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    Working with letter structure
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    The bottom left of the E kills the flow
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  19. Mippi

    Mippi Member

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    1st simple. How is it :/
     

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  20. weedeater

    weedeater Senior Member

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    E's a little big but other than that im diggin it