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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by S2!, Feb 17, 2006.
Yeah the E's are too big, they look like balls
Lemme know whatchu think
Lines are choppy cuz I used a paint marker. That shit is HARD to control, better with pencil...
Phree this dudes obviously just gunna troll shit until someone gives him a positive crit, fuck it
Lol this ain't no video game
some random stickers, throwies and characters. feedback?
what is your word, pots? your little character is cool especially the eyes are done well, you may just want to outline the top left with white or maybe red instead of just the black line around it.
letters could use a little definition, like for the P, try drawing one with a top part like on the one the green sticker, and the bottom part more like the one on the blue sticker
also, you usually dont want to use the same color as the outline for your shine lines/dots
Thanks, Im still trying to get down my throwie and stuff. ill get working on it
Hey I didn't hear any advice or critz from you guys, did you see my picture?
Line work is choppy and thicker in some places, its because I used a paint marker. Paint markers are really hard to control, better with pencil!
work on your letter structure?
Some of the first stickers I had done with my current character concept. Need a larger selection of colors to add more personality to them.
Best one is orange. Work on your tongues. Need more depth. Eyes are FAR FAR too simple. Add more flair to them and make them pop. The teeth are too weak. Dashes are too thick. Maybe add more wrinkles. It's not the colors, its just the characters that need work. They look like something I would see in clipart for goofy faces, thats not a compliment.
Oh, I made this doodle. Lemme know what you think.
I used an ultra skinny normal sharpie, thats why lines are fuzzy
current character concept
~ Nice use of alliteration man
sophlife ignore that shit, you got some decent simple faces, just try to make your lines a little straighter (and cut em straighter). and you may want to use a dark red or black for a circle in the back of the mouth
what kind of stickers are those on?
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carved a stamp of the church design, needs some clean up but heres the first few i tried out
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