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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    tezer - sick as fuck like always

    werse - straight simple, the only thing bugging me is the 'highlights'

    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekPiece4-1.jpg
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    edit: decided to go practice on my "wall" a little more

    forgot 3D between my N
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    i hate too admit it but this is probably the cleanest throw ive ever done
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  2. MARTYRaz

    MARTYRaz Banned

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    looks decent klic..get a bigger board..
     
  3. hawtlixx

    hawtlixx Member

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    thanks for the crits. I know my can control needs a lot of work, i'm gonna do something on the other side tomorrow so maybe i'll post it and see what people think... i'm getting my paint payed for so i'm writing girls names haha.

    rane - I think you need to work on your letters, make them less blob-like if you get what i mean. i like that you're starting simple and not getting ahead of yourself. keep it up.

    klic - I dig the ones with the blue fills, they're nice. the others aren't very clean imo.

    and I love the second and third tezer pics, they're sick. the first one is good, i guess i'm just not into it.
     
  4. downunder

    downunder Senior Member

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    fuck yeah guys i did all this mad graffiti vandalism on some cardboard in my back yard, gonna take some photos so i can post it on the internet
     
  5. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    YeAz BR0 M3 t00. iMA g00Na RaCK sUM MTN aNd g3T maD BKyrD uPZ CUz iMA K1NG 1n mAH h00D.
     
  6. downunder

    downunder Senior Member

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand you killed it.
     
  7. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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  8. seT1

    seT1 Member

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    Klic i used to write JK bout 1 and half years back :D
     
  9. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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  10. guilTrip

    guilTrip Member

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    I like the colors hawt

    Went from paper to my practice wall in a matter of minutes but i liked the idea so ran with it...
    ai563.photobucket.com_albums_ss73_guilTrip_s_throwupdrawing1.jpg
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    lov the critz.
     
  11. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    Drop your y further make all ur letters the same width and use bars, and up and down or side to side well filling
     
  12. whosthisguy

    whosthisguy Senior Member

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    lookin good dude
     
  13. hawtlixx

    hawtlixx Member

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    evasion, that's sick, i really like it, but i think maybe you went a bit overboard with the lens flare things, and a few lines could use cleaning up. other than that though, i think you're on the right track

    guilty, keep working on letter structure, and fix the last 3 letters... don't tilt the L like that, change the T up, and fix the y.

    this is my second attempt at a piece, trying to work on can control as much as possible... not making a lot of progress though, and i'm not quite satisfied with this one. i fucked up the first "m". let me know some can control tips if you've got any... all crits are welcome.

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  14. faser

    faser Senior Member

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    ^ yeh u shud sketch more
    and buy 50 dollar cans it will help with can control when ya finished them all.......
     
  15. guilTrip

    guilTrip Member

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    Thnx ya im gonna keep tryin to work on my structure for sure
     
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  16. saps

    saps Senior Member

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  17. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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    learn letter structure, unless this is a throw, then learn other styles and be cleaner. practice.
     
  18. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Janek...your practice is deffinately paying off...last one's not bad at all.

    Evasion...I think you should take it back a bit. Please don't ever stencil weed leaves or Ak's into your piece again. Like someone said, a bit overboard on the glare/shine effect, finally, work on cutting lines. I dunno why kids don't cut lines...it makes shit so much cleaner to look at....

    Guilty....sorry...no.. stuff to work on:
    Don't do faces in your letters (in my opinion, ever, I hate them always) But atleast until your ready
    Sketch. a lot. I respect a well painted straight letter i more than a messy attempt at style.
    Personally I'd lose the Nike swoosh thing and work on the handstyle
    Work on the drips
    Last, don't bother wasting like 2 cans on a fill, when the wall behind it is almost the exact shade. Not trying to be a dick, just giving honest crits.

    SAPS...not feeling the pointy letter ends at all, but the rest is pretty clean and simple...dope...

    HAWT, sketch a lot before you try anything that complicated again. That said, your overall can control isn't bad at all, but learn to cut lines. It would make a huge difference in your painting.

    Tezer, that white and purple on the round is on point



    Just fucking with can control for a clean background....gonna do a lot more with it...Crits?
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  19. Anion

    Anion Banned

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    I don't wanna' say what's been said but...

    Woulda' sucked to get bopped hittin' that wall cause you were wastin' time with that white on white fill. Then you really woulda' been 'guilty'. :D
     
  20. markingz.

    markingz. Banned

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    see that sap looks cool