Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Walls

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. Lazey

    Lazey Member

    • Messages: 31
    • Likes Received: 0
  2. Lazey

    Lazey Member

    • Messages: 31
    • Likes Received: 0
    ^my can control isn't great, but this is a toy thread and i started a few weeks ago, so.. please don't crit that aspect, unless you want to offer an in depth explanation.
     
  3. Shay70

    Shay70 Member

    • Messages: 32
    • Likes Received: 0
    SENK- just work on bar thickness the fills nice tho
    did u draw that character?

    crits
    ai752.photobucket.com_albums_xx167_tredegar47_photo.jpg
     
  4. Flash_One

    Flash_One Elite Member

    • Messages: 891
    • Likes Received: 8
    thanks dude
     
  5. Lazey

    Lazey Member

    • Messages: 31
    • Likes Received: 0
    yeah i drew the character too

    im feelin the colors, but you could work at your 3d a bit more, try a vanishing point.
     
  6. Shay70

    Shay70 Member

    • Messages: 32
    • Likes Received: 0
    yea my 3d is spot on when i draw, but when i paint its the larger scale that throws me off
     
  7. Ithaca

    Ithaca Member

    • Messages: 12
    • Likes Received: 3
    Please don't tell him to do something he will regret. You've basically just told him to stop doing the only unique thing in his throw besides his 'L', which happens to be both interesting and original.

    I think its time for Flash to leave the toy forum so his throwie won't be ruined by you telling him to 'fix' it.
     
  8. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

    • Messages: 3,652
    • Likes Received: 2
    flash one has mad skills wit his throws ive always thought he had a dope style.. props dude keep it up and fuck what half these kids think youve came along way no doubt.
     
  9. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

    • Messages: 3,652
    • Likes Received: 2
    imo the only thing wrong wit flashes bomb is the L(looks like it could be a ugly t) but meh and the H it seems to small and crowded but other then that the over lapping and all that looks good gives it that original flava flave ya kno... we all are diff and eachother thinks differently and imo flash that bombs tight but get out on the street wit throws keep them chill walls for piecers ya kno... stayup yo
     
  10. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

    • Messages: 3,652
    • Likes Received: 2
    some garbage i tossed up yesterday
    fucked up the rk imo pretty bad imo i already know..
    afarm5.static.flickr.com_4141_4914851705_d662795001_z.jpg
    afarm5.static.flickr.com_4102_4915459520_67dd4ef52a_z.jpg
    afarm5.static.flickr.com_4098_4914853927_16fda8d280_z.jpg
     
  11. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

    • Messages: 539
    • Likes Received: 0
    oh sorry, since when has evryone had to share the same opinion. maybe theres a reason his l is original

    ^this
     
  12. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

    • Messages: 639
    • Likes Received: 0
    Last edited: Aug 22, 2010
  13. Heklr

    Heklr Banned

    • Messages: 43
    • Likes Received: 0
    Check your shadow in some spots, Hork.
     
  14. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

    • Messages: 639
    • Likes Received: 0
    yah i see that
    the o was giving me some trouble
     
  15. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

    • Messages: 916
    • Likes Received: 0
    what the fuck is wrong with you?? wrong thread btw.
     
  16. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

    • Messages: 265
    • Likes Received: 0
    Hork- That kid is retarded, no offense. You're stuff is okay, but nothing fresh yet. It's straight though, everyone starts out rough. No beef or anything, just keepin' your head straight. I feel on the R and K, I've done that before a few times haha. Fix the amount each letter over laps, and the size, thickness, and amount of dead space for each letter to relatively the same. They kinda all go hand in hand, but yeah. And extensions are just like your letters, if they aren't flowing, they aren't working. Check your shadow on your K. You look like you got some good can control though, I know you can put it to good work bro. I'd tweak that throwie some too, a lotta dead space on that h, maybe have the arch swing high? I dunno, just play with it. And make sure you're letter size is the same as well.

    View attachment 581388
    Just freestyled this shit, the extension on the O looks retarted, but yeah. Ran out of purple so I couldn't cut lines on the background.
     
    Last edited: Aug 23, 2010
  17. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,891
    • Likes Received: 0
    I know this was a freestyle, but start over:
    Lose the highlights, work on all of your letters, lose the bump on the G and make it straight normal, lose the arrow in your tag and lose the double stroke and add 3D.
     
  18. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

    • Messages: 639
    • Likes Received: 0
     
  19. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,891
    • Likes Received: 0
    Just to clarify, Heklr was talking to Hork.
     
  20. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

    • Messages: 282
    • Likes Received: 1