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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
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^my can control isn't great, but this is a toy thread and i started a few weeks ago, so.. please don't crit that aspect, unless you want to offer an in depth explanation.
SENK- just work on bar thickness the fills nice tho
did u draw that character?
yeah i drew the character too
im feelin the colors, but you could work at your 3d a bit more, try a vanishing point.
yea my 3d is spot on when i draw, but when i paint its the larger scale that throws me off
Please don't tell him to do something he will regret. You've basically just told him to stop doing the only unique thing in his throw besides his 'L', which happens to be both interesting and original.
I think its time for Flash to leave the toy forum so his throwie won't be ruined by you telling him to 'fix' it.
flash one has mad skills wit his throws ive always thought he had a dope style.. props dude keep it up and fuck what half these kids think youve came along way no doubt.
imo the only thing wrong wit flashes bomb is the L(looks like it could be a ugly t) but meh and the H it seems to small and crowded but other then that the over lapping and all that looks good gives it that original flava flave ya kno... we all are diff and eachother thinks differently and imo flash that bombs tight but get out on the street wit throws keep them chill walls for piecers ya kno... stayup yo
some garbage i tossed up yesterday
fucked up the rk imo pretty bad imo i already know..
oh sorry, since when has evryone had to share the same opinion. maybe theres a reason his l is original
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hork - legit. you should try messing with some different fills
Check your shadow in some spots, Hork.
yah i see that
the o was giving me some trouble
what the fuck is wrong with you?? wrong thread btw.
Hork- That kid is retarded, no offense. You're stuff is okay, but nothing fresh yet. It's straight though, everyone starts out rough. No beef or anything, just keepin' your head straight. I feel on the R and K, I've done that before a few times haha. Fix the amount each letter over laps, and the size, thickness, and amount of dead space for each letter to relatively the same. They kinda all go hand in hand, but yeah. And extensions are just like your letters, if they aren't flowing, they aren't working. Check your shadow on your K. You look like you got some good can control though, I know you can put it to good work bro. I'd tweak that throwie some too, a lotta dead space on that h, maybe have the arch swing high? I dunno, just play with it. And make sure you're letter size is the same as well.
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Just freestyled this shit, the extension on the O looks retarted, but yeah. Ran out of purple so I couldn't cut lines on the background.
I know this was a freestyle, but start over:
Lose the highlights, work on all of your letters, lose the bump on the G and make it straight normal, lose the arrow in your tag and lose the double stroke and add 3D.
Just to clarify, Heklr was talking to Hork.
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