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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    It's rather the words you use, and the sentence structure, instead of the grammar and punctuation, which, if you had gone to school, you would have known.

    But fuck it, I don't even care anymore. haha. Just don't insult other kids when they tell you what they think about your work. I'm down for a battle if you really want to though. ha.
     
  2. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Erk - Not digging the r so much, but your fill is trippy.
    Jime - The E's a little low, rest is good
     
  3. SiNe-VrL-516

    SiNe-VrL-516 Senior Member

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  4. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    ^ 3D's a little off, and I'm not a big fan of the handstyle. I'm not sure how I feel about the letters.
     
  5. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    Like fury said, the 3d's off. Not a bad fill, but work on that shit you're trying to do with the color in the 3d. The extension that goes from the top of the S behind the whole thing down to the N is pointless. So is that one off the top of the E. Your IN look ok, but the S and E need some work. And your handstyle definitely does.
     
  6. SiNe-VrL-516

    SiNe-VrL-516 Senior Member

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    alright ill try and fix it upp thanks =P
     
  7. SoZoner

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    i like the green and the black :)
     
  8. W_G_O_N_E

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  9. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    I'm digging the first E a lot, the second one is kinda rotated too much. I'm digging the fill though, along with the colors.
     
  10. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    Yeah, nice colour scheme man! And it's petty, but maybe run the drip in the fill along the bar of the r rather than through the outline, nice tho
     
  11. One Evil

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  12. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Not digging the K too much, but I like the H. The hole in the O seems kinda random, with a line for the R.
     
  13. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

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    ya the O is shitty.. and imo the H is worse then my K but word thnx for the crits.
     
  14. lord_plankton

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    not bad. id suggest you not only in order to save paint but because of esthetical reasons to use the red as second outline and than here n there some black bubbles for background. get some bucket paint n roll the shit first.
    too much space between t and h...the r is weird and the s , i bet you see it.
    half of the 3d is fairly enough at least for me...
     
  15. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    yeah i agree with everyone's crits on my paintin , i freestyle them all right now , cause i honestly want to learn control , and cuttin back , and outlinin real good before i get into goin crazy on pieces . sounds like an excuse but i just aint that good. i got about eight or nine gallons of white , but i'm too lazy to mix it and roll it on .i onlyused maybe half a tin on the red anyways so i'm over it.
     
  16. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    doin a second outline will improve your skill alot.
     
  17. One Evil

    One Evil Elite Member

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    ai51.tinypic.com_1124k0j.jpg
    SORRY FOR SIZE
    did this this afternoon.. fucked up a bit on the O and the R is a lil weird but other that its not to bad but thats just me.. crits?

    and SINE that piece is pretty dope.. but theres a few minor adjustments the one guy above a few posts said that you should follow :)
     
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  18. Fury

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    I don't really like any of the letters, the extensions are weird to me. It's like you're trying too hard or something, try some more simples.
     
  19. W_G_O_N_E

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    yeah i can def. see where your comin from , i have done a second outline , and tried a third once or twice and it def. takes a lot more know how
     
  20. BlacktodaFuture

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    hork: your throw is dope but that piece is awful. go simple!