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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
ran out of paint 2 clean it up
I didn't know that the proper use of grammar and punctuation was a regional thing.
Nor would proper use of the English language make me an arrogant dumbass...
Stay in school, kiddo.
Or get a smart phone. It'll do most of the work your brain can't.
It's rather the words you use, and the sentence structure, instead of the grammar and punctuation, which, if you had gone to school, you would have known.
But fuck it, I don't even care anymore. haha. Just don't insult other kids when they tell you what they think about your work. I'm down for a battle if you really want to though. ha.
Erk - Not digging the r so much, but your fill is trippy.
Jime - The E's a little low, rest is good
^ 3D's a little off, and I'm not a big fan of the handstyle. I'm not sure how I feel about the letters.
Like fury said, the 3d's off. Not a bad fill, but work on that shit you're trying to do with the color in the 3d. The extension that goes from the top of the S behind the whole thing down to the N is pointless. So is that one off the top of the E. Your IN look ok, but the S and E need some work. And your handstyle definitely does.
alright ill try and fix it upp thanks =P
i like the green and the black
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I'm digging the first E a lot, the second one is kinda rotated too much. I'm digging the fill though, along with the colors.
Yeah, nice colour scheme man! And it's petty, but maybe run the drip in the fill along the bar of the r rather than through the outline, nice tho
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Not digging the K too much, but I like the H. The hole in the O seems kinda random, with a line for the R.
ya the O is shitty.. and imo the H is worse then my K but word thnx for the crits.
not bad. id suggest you not only in order to save paint but because of esthetical reasons to use the red as second outline and than here n there some black bubbles for background. get some bucket paint n roll the shit first.
too much space between t and h...the r is weird and the s , i bet you see it.
half of the 3d is fairly enough at least for me...
yeah i agree with everyone's crits on my paintin , i freestyle them all right now , cause i honestly want to learn control , and cuttin back , and outlinin real good before i get into goin crazy on pieces . sounds like an excuse but i just aint that good. i got about eight or nine gallons of white , but i'm too lazy to mix it and roll it on .i onlyused maybe half a tin on the red anyways so i'm over it.
doin a second outline will improve your skill alot.
SORRY FOR SIZE
did this this afternoon.. fucked up a bit on the O and the R is a lil weird but other that its not to bad but thats just me.. crits?
and SINE that piece is pretty dope.. but theres a few minor adjustments the one guy above a few posts said that you should follow
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