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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
cool story bro, got any crits for me?
Debut - Your bars fluctuate too much, your 3D is off, your B looks bad with a line through the middle, the whole on the E is too far to the left, your colors fade into other letters, and your E doesn't have 3D in the hole.
I actually like the B. Make the bars on the U fatter and maybe let the bottom part of the 'e' curve up a bit more cuz it seems a bit straight. And I like the T.
Crits if you want. I know what I already messed up on.
This one was me leaning off a ledge so not the best result
My friends char that he always tosses.
lol I like the character.
Been doing graff for a couple weeks now. My first bucket fill.
this one was a couple days ago.
im feelin both of the faces posted, but that SC throw isnt great, the C is weird i guess idk
does that say TEP or PER or something, lose the arrow
@MN Nice, is that shit on a house man? That's fucked up if it is
@Debut fix your bars, lose that damn line in the middle of the B, and round your u
@unbelted can't even tell what that says...Tep? Tey? Pey? work on some simps before you go fuckin around with curves and shit. Keep your bars the same thickness, preferably a bit thinner than you have them. Lose that arrow bullshit at the bottom
@Tokyo that would be sweet if you filled the whole face with white
Sorry about the quality of this picture, it was taken from a distance with a shit camera. I was pleased with it. its on a high traffic highway. It was pretty large too. crits
I actually happen to like the B. Revert your T back to the one from the last pic you posted. Then, just fix your U somehow.
i did this one, then the purple one after, so this T came first, but i feel ya. Also, i happen to like the line in my B
aight, i might just try and drop it on my next one, see how it looks
had to get a new account, heres some recents.
killin em with that Johnny Bravo flat, i watched that show today, its still dope.
i wanted to try one with no holes, crits?
i see flats extencions still suck
but its ight i guess
put the holes back in.
also, flat, you make me laugh. How many times you gonna get your ass killed in a battle before you start to make your letters better? Cartoon characters dont take away from the fact your extensions suck cock. When you gonna learn fruity fills dont make a good piece.
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i'd take that shit any day over some fancy colors
I wanna try that color scheme sooo bad ^
@ Strange Journeys: not bad as a straight, simple and effective, next step is to clean it up abit, and start working on towards a piece.
@ Ian: my extensions suck, I get it, but up something that you've done, and see how it stands beside something of mine, don't up something that is not yours, and say that it's better. My letters might "suck" but atleast they are original in a way, I'm trying my best not to bite anyone, and as for the fills, it's just to add some flavour to the piece other than just 1 tone for a fill, and black 3d. god-damn you can be a bitch when you want to.
@IAN-You are right about his letter structure blowing and how his cartoon characters can not make up for the shitty looking piece...
But most of us on here really don't deserve the right to hate on "Flat"... Dude is actually out there painting a lot... sooner or later something is going to kick in and he will develop a decent style. when that happens he will already have the paining experience and pretty much be set... That's the least I can say for the majority of the toys on BombingScience
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