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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    cool story bro, got any crits for me?
     
  2. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Debut - Your bars fluctuate too much, your 3D is off, your B looks bad with a line through the middle, the whole on the E is too far to the left, your colors fade into other letters, and your E doesn't have 3D in the hole.
     
  3. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    Yeah:

    I actually like the B. Make the bars on the U fatter and maybe let the bottom part of the 'e' curve up a bit more cuz it seems a bit straight. And I like the T.
     
  4. Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub

    Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub Senior Member

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  5. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Crits if you want. I know what I already messed up on.

    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p104_skier46_IMG_3740.jpg_04c505cd222711cda01ef620e9001dbb.jpg

    This one was me leaning off a ledge so not the best result

    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p104_skier46_IMG_3743.jpg

    My friends char that he always tosses.

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  6. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    lol I like the character.
     
  7. unbeltedjoker

    unbeltedjoker New Member

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    tep.jpg
    Been doing graff for a couple weeks now. My first bucket fill.
     
  8. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    [​IMG][/url][/IMG]

    this one was a couple days ago.

    im feelin both of the faces posted, but that SC throw isnt great, the C is weird i guess idk

    does that say TEP or PER or something, lose the arrow
     
  9. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    @MN Nice, is that shit on a house man? That's fucked up if it is

    @Debut fix your bars, lose that damn line in the middle of the B, and round your u

    @unbelted can't even tell what that says...Tep? Tey? Pey? work on some simps before you go fuckin around with curves and shit. Keep your bars the same thickness, preferably a bit thinner than you have them. Lose that arrow bullshit at the bottom

    @Tokyo that would be sweet if you filled the whole face with white
     
  10. SHUT

    SHUT Senior Member

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    Sorry about the quality of this picture, it was taken from a distance with a shit camera. I was pleased with it. its on a high traffic highway. It was pretty large too. crits:)

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  11. .Cuore

    .Cuore Senior Member

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    I actually happen to like the B. Revert your T back to the one from the last pic you posted. Then, just fix your U somehow.
     
  12. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    i did this one, then the purple one after, so this T came first, but i feel ya. Also, i happen to like the line in my B
     
  13. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    aight, i might just try and drop it on my next one, see how it looks
     
  14. Leopold Stotch

    Leopold Stotch Member

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    had to get a new account, heres some recents. 011.jpg 015.jpg 014.jpg
     
  15. Strange Journeys

    Strange Journeys Senior Member

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    killin em with that Johnny Bravo flat, i watched that show today, its still dope.

    [​IMG][/url][/IMG]

    i wanted to try one with no holes, crits?
     
  16. skinaone

    skinaone Elite Member

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    i see flats extencions still suck
    but its ight i guess
     
  17. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    put the holes back in.

    also, flat, you make me laugh. How many times you gonna get your ass killed in a battle before you start to make your letters better? Cartoon characters dont take away from the fact your extensions suck cock. When you gonna learn fruity fills dont make a good piece.

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    i'd take that shit any day over some fancy colors
     

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  18. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    I wanna try that color scheme sooo bad ^
     
  19. Leopold Stotch

    Leopold Stotch Member

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    @ Strange Journeys: not bad as a straight, simple and effective, next step is to clean it up abit, and start working on towards a piece.
    @ Ian: my extensions suck, I get it, but up something that you've done, and see how it stands beside something of mine, don't up something that is not yours, and say that it's better. My letters might "suck" but atleast they are original in a way, I'm trying my best not to bite anyone, and as for the fills, it's just to add some flavour to the piece other than just 1 tone for a fill, and black 3d. god-damn you can be a bitch when you want to.
     
  20. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    @IAN-You are right about his letter structure blowing and how his cartoon characters can not make up for the shitty looking piece...
    But most of us on here really don't deserve the right to hate on "Flat"... Dude is actually out there painting a lot... sooner or later something is going to kick in and he will develop a decent style. when that happens he will already have the paining experience and pretty much be set... That's the least I can say for the majority of the toys on BombingScience