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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
work on your letter structure [Broken External Image]:http://www.zhujiad.com/5-10.jpg
thanks for the crits guys. yea ive been sketching alot, i just started but hope with practice it will come.
@fake & adams, what u think i should change about the letter structure? more simple or what?
It's been a while since I've posted anything, I havent had internet in a while.. Here's something from earlier today for my friend shock's birthday
^^^real clean man nice job
thanks yo! nice color combo, that came out pretty ill
fake rome by bench warrant, on Flickr
^It's Dakine, used to be my shredding backpack but i use it for paint now cause the po confiscated my Mark Ecko one last year.
You got good color schemes. The designs in the fill are wack, chop off that curved extension on the F, keep an eye on bar widths and continuity. I remember your older shit and youre improving, looks like you figured out how to fit your letters together. But id keep the characters on paper till they're good/more original.
some pieces from earlier this year..
crits on the pave?
I think ur 3d is off pave, it doesn't seem like its going in any direction
Ditched work to go paint today. My shit came out pretty clean(ish) so Im glad it was worth it lol. Crits?
Oh and its TAKE not JAKE
@blackmath, a black outter shell would have made that pop! and maybe connecting the rest of the E to the top of it would have balanced it out with the T, other than that it looks pretty good to me. And heres a little something I rocked with some scraps..
oversprae ya know, I was actually gonna do the black double outline thing, as i usually do, but I ran outta paint hahah. but thanks man i appreciate it
And that fill is fuckin siiick, the colors are dope too
Thanks mane, I did what I could with what I had..
*****math- do the T extension the other way if ya gonna do it. or it'll look like a J. and your drop shadow is off in many places.
id of connected the T also
heres a new and old 1s!!
Holy shit dank you finally weren't a douche lol, but I like what youre sayin, Ill try it out. And i know on the drop shadow, I always do 3D so i wanted to mix it up but have never really sketched it out all the way
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