what i mean is that you're too repetitive, at this point, all your pieces look the same just diff colors. your letters. same structure, same edgy, squarey, uptight style. even your 3d is still the same. in all your pieces, it's always going straight to the left without a vanishing point. you even always have those same black stripes in your 3d in a nutshell, it became boring. I don't stop at your posts anymore, I just skip on down the page past your flicks dude. and I'm just a sample of the rest of the site's users know what I mean? it's nothing personal. and I'm not hating on you. what you should do is experiment with new styles, new flows, new styles... hell try new fills at least bro. get some inspiration of course. it seems to me like you don't look at enough graff, as if you're not exposed to steezy pieces. check out some sick writers man. it seems to me like you've gotten decent at freestyling those pieces fast, and you're happy that you get outta wherever you are quickly while still having dropped a -TECHNICALLY- full piece. you feel safe in your comfort zone and you don't wanna risk stepping further. take my advice, "fine" doesn't cut it anymore dude... you need to aim for "fucking awesome" if you think you're not ready to fuck with your style and do something new, I suggest going at it little by little with baby steps. how about trying some rounded edges? or curves instead of corners? how about adding a few serifs here and there? check my entry for the toy piece battle to know what I mean by "minor additions" it's a straight-forward simple piece. but just a few nick-nacks added here and there to give it a little more flavor safe man, hope I helped. and sorry for the long post
shit gowj... not bad not bad.. steppin up I see. props on the nice color scheme man. also the E is a nice touch
GASR1 Grimey Kids Krew Fall Fashion The wall was wet so I just made sure there was drips everywhere so the first few that showed up wouldn't feel lonely. I swear.
There is already a dope gasr with hundreds of throwups running. I wouldn't use that name if I was you. PHERE GASR by bench warrant, on Flickr GASR by bench warrant, on Flickr gasr by bench warrant, on Flickr Nofr that's the best I've seen for You yet. I dig the fill
Thanks homies. Its supposed to be an e, i thought it looked like an r too. That SPA one is crazy, not feelin the color scheme of the sp^n one but the letters are solid as usual. It's hard to find good greens and oranges unless you get graff brands. Fresh paint has good shades and cost the same as rusto according to my friend. Codeine Purple, just try that shit.
Word up man, yea my color taste is still really underdeveloped. But i'm working out the kinks. that's kinda why I wentwith the black n white steez with that last joint. I'm a huge fan of dem dollar cans
a really old wall, i know the structure and letters are pretty wack. but oh well. i got drunk afterword. [Broken External Image]:http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/del11.jpg
lol. when the universe implodes in a few million years, and time starts to move backwards, maybe it will make some sense.
Haha no its not an excuse, its more like when you finish something an you know its not great as younwanted it to be so you get fucked up to make it seem like it looks better, dont tell me you havent done that. I do it with some of my fine arts stuff ( gotta have that flask) lolll
Lol you got that shit twisted. If I got hammered every time I wasn't happy with a piece I'd be an alcoholic.
rofl, i used to drink alot, not so much anymore. and i dont paint often as you can tell, so whatever i dont need to explain myself to you im just here for crits. because i want to get better. that is all.
Early mornin shit. I like it, but the G is wonkey and it gets smaller as it goes on. Shoulda went as big as the dude to your left