lol when toys attack

 

first Little Bridge spot i caught

 

@resk you should be posting in the bb thread, not the walls. Draw more, paint less.

 

Haven't posted for a while but have been getting busy can i have some crits?
My Pieces in order:
First

Second

Third

Forth <- Scraps and ran outta paint

Fifth

 

@muse you should thicken up those bars and the first looks best IMO

 

yeah the first one looks best, like vapid said thicken the bars and also i think lost a few of the little extensions for now. like that thing on the left bar of the M
not too bad tho keep practicing

 

Cheers for feedback every time before i go painting i think so much about bigger bars
then i do the piece and the bars come out way skinnier then i intended haha

 

[Broken External Image]:http://www.flickr.com/photos/jesusgraffiti/10606486266/

 

Did this other day...
Crits?

 

shadow needs work

 

I sketch better then i paint ...

 

@muse Next time you do a piece focus on having thicker bars. The thin bars make your painted work look messy

 

@muse I agree with vapik, and dont worry, this is paint, in real life you dont really focus on the messes.

 

I always aim to do not as tall letters and make them fatter but it doesnt end up happening lol next one will be fat i promise xx

 

@Muse those pieces are cleannnn, you have good can control
@Ap1 those flicks^ are nice
@Dkru keep it up, those letters look pretty clean