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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
Looks like it says water dut or water out
Edit: looks like watch out to me.
Versa, just go much more simple and it will look nicer than a poor attempt at stylized letters.. keep at it
Eats i like that it took me a minute to clock the letters but it's a nice style i haven't seen before
Verce that's really bad, like everything is wrong with it
My shit :
@stabpigs, I fucking love that handle.. It's clean, and that goes a long way. Your shine is way shot, I see what you're going for but it needs help. Post some book structure, are you working on other styles rn?
Not even, I'm like a little kid when it comes to sketching i'll spend five minutes on it and then get pissed off if it's shit. That styles pretty much what i'm going with at the minute, though i usually switch my letters every few months or so.
This is what i was painting about 4 or so months ago, did some straight letters now i'm on the one above
Auris, stick to what you're doing with that pink/baby blue one... stay as simple as possible and allow your style to evolve naturally without forcing it
Hey, this i my first post and i was just looking for any advice i can get. These are my first and second ever pieces and before that i had only ever done a couple tags so obviously they are toy as fuck but you need to start somewhere right? so im just looking for any sort of feedback on what im doing wrong and how to improve,
Same, just eat more acid and find out on your own. Fr, though, post some blackbook stuff. Those color schemes are terrible, stick to single color fills for rn. Can control needs help, and kill that double aura/forecefield/whatever ya call it.
The homie Tune with the character on point as usual. He hooked up my fill too.
been a long ass minute but finally got out and painted today..rusty but oh well
you asked for it
eats...the fill is dope i wish you wouldnt have spoiled it for us... no bs the white roller is tight....on the green piece the s is very redundant it is hard to make out letter...bar structure is on point the consistency between each bar is good on the T maybe make the middle bar more prominent could be an M on the S the bars seem like the could be mismatched so they fit better..can controlis goood but the S and T need adjusting IMO...i think it is the third bar on the A that throws it off
subturb....line work isnt bad just few overlapps in the black outline...more painting...the bulb in the g could be bigger and the bar pointing in need o be thicker also i think it doent need to join the bulb make it a seperate bar not tuouching bulb...the m i s also elusive....the R buld could also be bigger too.. i like it im am just being picky
this is if you want to make it better...
ps.. toys for crits unite
Thanks dude I appreciate the crits
Germs, Nice to see you on walls! I hope we see this sort of shit a lot this summer.
Syc: Respect. I hear you on all that shit. Thanks for taking the time out, bradda. Ended up rolling my face off when I was finishing this piece, so there's a lot I would change. I'm trying to work on doing fills like that, but I have a hard time finding the artistic ability in me for that.
was gonna post this in "post your painted pieces" but those guys make me look like hella toy soooooo............................
dollar can fills.
I'd say not bad for dollar cans. Keep it up n keep working at it
Not sure why it posted upside down...practice in my garage
Mero that shit is straight killer status. Take that shit on out to the Intermediate section. Even there, idk. Shit is boss.
Hand-s, nice fill, idk about your structure
Hand-s, give your letters more meat? Think I seen you post something earlier that had good structure.
Fucked my shine all up and my T is waaay off. Murder me with crits.
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