I think its kinda weird that some letters are capital and some not. Besides i love the coloring very nice
Get your hand style really good or atleast a bit better and it will help you structure your pieces better, I found this helped in my personal experience
some flicks from the past week, australian writer from near sydney here looking to meet other aus writers
i wouldnt suggest fucking around with 2 color fades until you can rock letter structure and can control.
I think the middle part of the s should be thicker because the rest of your bars are at a specific thickness. the e middle bar looks trash bro. it looks shaky. those little connections suck too, just saying. could have had better colors. just wondering, do you buy your paint @skrit. ?