Thanks for the help ALIVE... I can see now what you mean about the cracks, and i see where i have missed bits on the 3d The light source its shining down...so i figure i do the highlights on the opposite side to the 3d...if that makes sense...but ill try and work on them Cheeers
First of all we all need to improve. There is never a point in your life that you can't improve a single thing. But post this in the blackbook section to get more crits. My crits...NO ADDONS/ARROWS or anything of that sort. Start simple with simple block letters that look exactly like the letters on your keyboard but a lot wider. I don't know how many times that has been posted here but it is one of the most impotant thing there is to graff. Also try to keep your lines clean. They can be sketchy at first but then erase the bad parts so it looks cleaner. One last thing, I'd get a better camera because that has really bad quality.
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I think that would look better if you didnt do any drop shadow. For the two letter bomb at least. If you do a throw thats cool, but I think the bomb would look better without it. Plus, the shadow that you do have is sketchy as fuck.
[Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4388/sh045mq8.jpg i dont paint in my house anymore, i found a chill spot, so you guys dont have to tell me...
yes i used a pink dot for the fill i used a german fat for the outline i thought i put a german outline on the can, but i knew i didnt when i made the first line, so i just went with it instead of messing it up even more...