I love that other pic of your elcs that style is mad. Yeah the S looks like a 5 lol but still alright I spose I know my shit is way worse I'm getting more black and white cans on Tuesday so I should go out sometime..

 

nah, its there but like i said its not thick enough. and yea, the shitty angle doest help. thanks tho

 

ok guys what do u think.. crits?

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the dots in the R are ugly

 

what shud i use instead?

 

dont make em as big, should look good then

 

alright sweet.

 

i wouldnt use dots...i'd just put a line in middle of the R instead of dots that are off to the right...but thats just me.

 

Like that I guess...I dunno. but those dots look bad.

 

looks too much like an A to me...

 

oh yea...it kinda does

 

Put a x or just a dot I like the style I wanna learn it.

 

can i get any more help on this or my other stuff from a few pages back? dont mean to keep bumping... :unsure:

 

any of these work?

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whoops sorry double post, my interent was screwing around

 

The first one is the best in my opinion

 

ok sure thing! i will post it in a bit
yeah finding it uber-hard to get a Y
anyone else got a throw up with a Y in it so i can get some inspiration?

 

syco throwies

http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgra...p?artist_id=242

sye5

http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgra...?artist_id=3044

jay throwies

http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgra...hp?artist_id=97


dont bite

 

thanks alot man - they were super helpful
i owe u one