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any other constructive critisism?

 

Make all the letters the same size, the A and K don't seem as big as the B and E.

 

anything on mine?

 

Fill it in?

 

of course when i post i get dicked on the last page [/b][/quote]
not even one comment? damn i feel like a myspace hoewanting pic cpmments

 

I've seen alot better.
But I like how you can actually read it.
Try to keep that and make sure people can read it.

 

i dont knowxhowyou were monthsago but.

1) stop using cheap paint
2) play around with some caps.. your fill need work, expecially if your goin for that half assed fill look
3) and your 3d is mad off try from a 45 deg angle n not directly south

 

one of my first attemps for a burner

mas*cst \/

 

i dont knowxhowyou were monthsago but.

1) stop using cheap paint
2) play around with some caps.. your fill need work, expecially if your goin for that half assed fill look
3) and your 3d is mad off try from a 45 deg angle n not directly south [/b][/quote]
your fucking stupid cheap paint is the shit it doesnt matter if u use fucking dollar store paint or fucking belton as long as ur shit look diesent

 

exactly^^^

 

no offense, but thats pretty horrible. just do simples man

 

i have gone back to writing nugs :blink:

 

oh really.. i didn't know one could gain can control by doodling with markers and pencils. Do you get overspray with markers? Runs with pencils? [/b][/quote]
shutup smartass, you dont know shit

 

Advice from anyone? Crits... [/b][/quote]
letters are wack.....stick to blocks for a while man...... view topic on how to construct letters,i know it doesn't help with bombs,but KEEP IT SIMPLE

 

shutup smartass, you dont know shit [/b][/quote]
practise in your basment or something, sketchs do make you better....but your right they don't give you practise painting

 

The 3d is fucked up on it, and you might want to keep all the letters same size/proportion, it got a little off on the H...

 

your fucking stupid cheap paint is the shit it doesnt matter if u use fucking dollar store paint or fucking belton as long as ur shit look diesent [/b][/quote]
im liking the letter's ....

peng.2 .... put it in the blackbook thread and ask for crit's....i can only say ... " go simple "

 

im liking the letter's ....

peng.2 .... put it in the blackbook thread and ask for crit's....i can only say ... " go simple " [/b][/quote]
I love yuks letter structure, Y's are hard to do, but he gots em down. , but the 3d, not going down/