wor\k on ur letters man. like be for u paint sumthing ask ur self ur u really happy with ur sketch if u even botherd to sketch someting in the first place.also when u go to slow with ur oout like ur gunna get those drips but u dont have to many (not as bad a some people in this fourm) just try to practise in a nice chilled spot some were. some place maybe were u can go in the middle of the day and not have to worry about getting caught and just focus on ur shit. but keep sketchn tell ur satisfied with something and when u r post it in the black book section and if ppl dont think its to terible try it out some were. and im diggin the green
if ur gonna make excuses, then get it right. drips mean ur going too slow. therefor that u did it fast, doesnt make sense. comprendo? and may i ask, when is a throw not done fast? and how often do we paint in "quality" light? [/b][/quote] It's called going over a line. If you go over the line a few times, repeatedly, it'll drip. comprendes? that's one of the reasons it looks sloppy, i wasn't being too careful when I did that so you can see where I was going over it again. Things get posted in here asking for crits on the work, not the excuses.
eror: yes, and his crit on your work was that it was sloppy and drippy as hell at the bottom. the only one giveing excuses here is u. "comprendes". when i first saw the flick i thought u ment for the drips to be there. but u cant tell me u didnt notice drips like that when u were doing it. sorry to sound like im snapping back at u but u get what u give. if u post something here with errors on it and ask for crit people are gunna point that shit out. expect it. also, wanted to bump this just for kicks. bottom of page and no crits really. View attachment 252771
^^im feelin that is it a stencil? i would only suggest that you get his teeth in order not that they cant be nasty just clean em up a bit
no not a stencil. i need to get some thin caps but its not like u really care when your tore up like i was. thanks for the crits.
[Broken External Image]:http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1336/throw1nc9.jpg this is sketchy cause my caps were fucking up and shit.. basically this is my last piece of graffiti until summer, no throws, no tags.. nothing...pretty much because i hate the cold, i hate painting in the cold, i hate caps that fuck up in the cold, i hate paint that's pretty much transparent, i hate mean streaks that crumble because of the cold..and also most importantly, i think i need to sketch more and develop shit more.
that's got potential man, i think the "e" needs something to make it a little bit more noticable as an "e" i hear you on painting in the cold and caps fucking up, i had one the other night that made the can pretty much explode paint on my hand, i was wearing a latex glove but that shit was freezing cold i finished the piece and about the same time had to hide from a cop, i was standing there i thought i was going to get frost bite... the only thing i could do was put my hand on my balls to warm it up.
[Broken External Image]:http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2476/img0004ab9.jpg I just started and this is my first bomb. this is also my first post on here. im in it for the critiquing and to hear what i need to work on i know theres alot!
Dude, just to let you know on this forum it's ettiquite to crit others before asking for crits yourself or bumping your pics. No offence but the throw is pretty terrible. The first thing that jumps out at me is the big extention on the top right of the 'S'. Seriously there's quite a lot wrong with it. All I can say for now is to take things back a notch and practice simplier letters. That goes for your handy too. I wouldn't paint for now either, keep to your book. You probably shouldn't have gne over the person as well.
Yeah no offense but that guy you painted over was most likely 5x better than you. Go buy an art book without lines, NOT a BLACKBOOK, that's a waste of money for you right now. Don't go wasting your money on expensive outdoor tagging markers, buy a pack of sharpies with about 24 different colors and practice with those in your art book. Don't go out and bomb/tag until people start to tell you that your handstyle/bomb/piece is good. And post some of your shit that you draw in the Toy Blackbook thread.
Thanks guys! could u be a little more specific on what i need to work on? i knew it was terrible im new to this shit and u say just stick to drawing do i just draw aimlessly and try to develop something or is there somethin i should work on drawing?
Ask here for advice: Toy Story Be sure to post up pictures of what you draw in the Toy Blackbook thread so people will give you constructive criticism, but be sure to give crits before you ask for them.
What these guys forgot to mention is your can control is bad. (no offense) You have pretty sketchy drips on the bottom, and it looks like you were going through a seizure when you were painting your lines on the i. Your 3d is also off on the tip of the I and on the side on the n. You have a horrible add-on in the right side of the n that you might want to just completely take off until you get a better concept of add-ons. Also, the fill in looks really thick in areas and really light in others, but thats just my constructive crits. Like they said above me you might want to just stick to poppin' sketches for a while, or atleast practicing in a chill spot.
thanks dude yea i know the drips are horrible. i started with a few of my homies and im by far the best outta them so they are all saying how good it is but i knew it sucked and im wanting to get better so im glad im get the crits from all u nigs so i keep workin on my shit
I think you guys said all. Except. I think that better link is Graffiti Basics. It has very constructive posts etc, compared to Toy Story ;> On my way to home ( I'm leaving tomorrow morning ). Went to some yard blah blah, with some home crew. Left my marks in Paris ( again ). The only thing is that, after 2-3 years of writing. I am still afraid to start putting doodats. Don't know if I'm good enough. Etc etc. Don't wanna go ego trippin' and start pretending im some wild-styler. Thou, I dared to do this sketch for which i got inspiration 30 mins before the actual writing/drawing. [Broken External Image]:http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y285/Wiz27/23022007283.jpgGraffiti Basics huh?