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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. dibz

    dibz Senior Member

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    cyzo- work on makin those letters not so wide and in some areas and not so skinny unless your going for a certain vibe with your letters ya know. cuz the bottom of you c is alot larger than any other letter. an those bubbles on the side could use some fixing as well.



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    my n looks kinda like a h on this piece .


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    the t looks a little far away to me now that i look at it.
     
  2. Hoes

    Hoes Member

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  3. ScNk

    ScNk Member

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    i reckon u shud shorten that h a bit

    cyz work on structure of colours its a good simple but an outline would've made it stand out way more

    rant really diggin the styles u've come up with and colour cords
    work on structure and maybe close the letters a bit they look too seperated esp 2nd one, the R is too far away aswell as the T like u said. i reckon R in first one is also too far away but the rest of the letters are joined nicely try keep that T in the first one with visible corners, i see the left part of the t is hidden under which makes it look like a c
     
  4. smile_

    smile_ Senior Member

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    looks dope, just try to make the A more defined, got any crits on mine? :cool:
     
  5. hhhhhhh

    hhhhhhh Senior Member

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    smile; i dont mind the S but i would get rid of the little joint that starts it, the I and L are to alike fix one of them make the E have a bigger pop out and personaly id get rid of the smily face at the top

    cyzo, looks like , you are getting ahead of your self but the Y is alright

    dibz, i like the second flick id fix the bottom of the N becuse it cuts off right into a corner

    hoes , i like it but would make the O a bitbigger so it touches the bottem and cut the H down a bit



    now some of you give me crits
     
  6. illadelph

    illadelph Elite Member

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    On Your Throw Up....

    Try Doin Just A 2 Letter Joint...don't Anybody Do 2 Letters Any Dam More?? The One Kid Had Damn Near The Whole Alphabet On The Wall....2 Piecers Are Quick And Easy....and If Somebody Don't Got No Skills ,it's Easier To Fuck Up Four Letters Than It Is Two.....
     
  7. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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  8. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    hhhhhh: it looks like you got decent can control but you could improve on some of your letters
    CYZ: you need to work on your letters as well the Z looks like an E
    Rant: im not feeling those highlights in the first peice, maybe try using a thicker cap? and the second has a real nice outline but im not feeling the letters to much.
     
  9. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    Over: nice throw, i dont like the O in the first one and really like the second. The chrac is nice too and i like that handstyle
     
  10. C-SONE

    C-SONE Senior Member

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  11. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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  12. smile_

    smile_ Senior Member

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    C-SONE nice spot, nice piece.. I would just try to make the letters a little closer, but other than that, looks awesome..
     
  13. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    the right side of the n looks fucked up.
     
  14. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    yea peace looks good control wise and fill but i dont like the N
     
  15. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    that monk is preatty good for ur first one and the guy that bit copes e looks like he went over a nice throwy too u should go over him
     
  16. cyzo

    cyzo Member

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    Why dont you shut up and post some pics instead of chatting and i was only twelve atthe time
     
  17. denaaa

    denaaa Senior Member

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    lol calm down he was just saying what he thought would make the piece better i agree with him and so what if you were twelve now your 13 one year not even a couple months difference big fucking woop shut up and take the crits
     
  18. TESTER

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  19. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    should have filled it.
    kinda dumb to cover throws with a hollow.
    looks alright though.
    E could be fixed so the bottom was bigger and the top was smaller (match the S a little bit)
     
  20. hhhhhhh

    hhhhhhh Senior Member

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    c-sone- dope throw , the right side of N in your pice/burner looks fucked other then that nice colours would look better with a backround imo