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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
thats really cool
damn thats fresh. can controls redunk
some new ish, wack but crits would be fantastic
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atlok- the first looks pretty good, except the big thing on the bottom of the S is sort of out of place. and in the other two, the letter structure doesn't look very good, but you've got some goood can control.
first time painting this throw. can't see the whole thing because my phone's flash is shitty. crits?
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Yo Main,looking Good.do More Strait Letter Shit Like That White One You Got There,just Add A Better Fill,then Experiment With Little Ad Ons .focus On One Line At A Time.and Take Your Time..
AND LOOSE THAT LITTLE SQUIGGLE ON THE S MSC.PLAYED OUT. BUT GOOD OVERALL.
yo thanks berk, shits dope dude. letters nice and that can is fuckin dope. illin
berk- it would be so much better if the whole thing was red or a solid dark color.
i dont like the lime on white.
but beside that....its dope.
yo mosez dope throwie i like yellow fills. back in the day when i wrote PLONE i would always use yellow fills. and ya i like the squiggle thing
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hey i just did that a minute ago i know i need to clean it up but are there any more crits for it it says sm
harry - no sir i dont like it. letters are out of proportion and dont look good. go simple. 3-d is pretty fucked looking, forcefield as well. go to the new to graff thread. stick to blackbooks, or at least some wood in your back yard, if thats not where this is.
thnx for the feedback everyone...
Main:your piece looks nice and clean and
the M + N of your hollows aswell but i would fix the shape
of the A&I and try to make the shape more like the m&n..
Atlok:I really like the last 2 pieces you made especially the last one, great fillin and love the shadow.. for the first one: im not really feelin that s, iwould change the bottom or top because now the bottom looks really big and top very small..
mosez:i think i like that throwie but can`t see it to well
Berk:i like the letterstructure and the spraycan, the piece looks clean to but i don`t really like the white/lime combination either..
Harry:likeoner is right..start simple..sketch alot..and when you can dream your throwups than start to do some hallows or simple throwups..when you can do that and have some cancontrol add some shadow and a forcefield..
Berk - Keep posting!
Harry - For throwups dont use so many colors and do multiple shadows and 3d and forcefields because it just starts to look like fruit salad.
DAMNNN ATMOS!!!! that piece is FIRE. I like the T change and those colors are like BAPE camo haha man thats nice!
sm- see the bottom of you "m"? yeah well the line septerating the two..."legs"? lol idk yeah it should be thinner. and loose that crazy spider man thing outside the force.
you need alot of work
my buddy did this kashiznit and i used the rest of his white on a shitty ass bomb, some crits for the guy without an account
That Atmos is so fantastic, I love the colors. SM work on lines, and like other stuff too.
atmos, good use of those colors.
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eh theres the full version slerm is the word and no i dident cheat in that slerm battle i liked the word and occasionally use it now wel i tried to clean it up and use less colors and shit i know the drop shadow is fucked and the force field isnt as tight as it should be but anything else would be nice...?
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