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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yeah, im gettin more paint tomorrow, so hopefully i can have a new one up. im gonna do a capital I and circle up the top of the E a bit more.i realized i made the bars on my N too thin, i aalso fucked up the middle bar. its far from good, but at least my shits nearly good enough to be hittin the rooftops
     
  2. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    i know you said "nearly" but its quiet fuckin far off son, in my town cause i dont know hows your goes down but if its a rooftop and your shits wack its gettin capped in a day flat
     
  3. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Wrong thread man, tot Bbook or tot throwie thread.
    Well your letters have some real shape to them now.
    I'd say keep with it, just keep playing with the K's and E's shape until you find something that flows better.
     
  4. My bad.
    i posted it in that thread too,
    but nobody gave crits.

    and thanks.
     
  5. yellow12

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  6. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    nah not realy it was the concept of that piece because its the midel :rolleyes:
     
  7. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    hellomynameis- first of all get rid of that sig, u better not be bombing shit with that. dont take this the wrong way. its gunna get worse before it gets better, stick to the books practice simples. S-I-M-P-L-E-S. stay off the mr wiggles/generic graffiti fonts and learn this like u learned to write letters in kindergarden.

    Jet- im impressed, if that really means anything, looks like u took your time with that and it shows, maybe thicken up your letters a bit, the metal style works for some but its hard to pull off. when your laying down your outline dont worry about over lapping lines, make it as even thickness as u can, cus your fill is gunna cover all of the line marks. curves are had to make look clean. so try to get as little curves as u can.
    hope that helps a bit.

    rsakens - that k is HUGE to the rest of your letters, but ive seen the sketch of that and i think it looks like the sketch. k's are my worst letter by far, cant stand them. i to me your fill is over shadowing your letters. but its sharp, clean lines man. keep it up.
     
  8. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    nearly is a big word, if nearly was a line, id be at the start. but i get what your saying. a lot of the shit in my town is wack. shitty filled generic bombs, i think its decent compared to the other shit. but i wanna get several more painted before i judge where i am again

    and yes fube, if that was directed to me it means a lil somethin haha thanks. ill take those into consideration for my next one
     
  9. Fluffy Bunnies

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  10. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    i dont know how it gos down in your town but in mine, dont matter how ugly your shit is if its high and hard to get to that bitch is gunna ride for a while. a week at least.:D

    that a slap fluff? K! haha.
     
  11. /deletes sig.
    okay, ill scrap it.

    thanks for the advice.
     
  12. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    thankx for the advice fube
    i will keep that in mind for the next piece
    & yeah the k is a bitch of a letter hate hate it my self so badly =/
    have to learn it don't want to change my name =]
     
  13. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    that shit is mad unerrated. with the tan fade and how clean the lines are i fuckin dig it. keep it up man
     
  14. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    a week? haha the shit in my town is up there for months at a time. this one bomb looked like complete asshole, it was up there for a solid 3-4 months. iunno how its gonna go down in the summer. but they just buffed the roofs an shit from the winter the past couple of weeks.

    kay well, here's some shit from this afternoon. the only reason im posting it is so other's feel better about their work. this shit makes baby jesus cry:(
    [Broken External Image]:http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8404/dsc00558rs0.jpg
     
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  15. DEAR

    DEAR Senior Member

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  16. yellow12

    yellow12 Member

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    Hey dear. Isn't your D & E a little small in comparison to your A and R? Also what angle were you going for for your 3D? I'm just trying to get my head around my 3D's at the mo, so not a crit just want to know as I'm not sure what angle you're working with.

    Check my piece on the page before this, a highlight can really make the letters stand out. Also I got told to let my clouds drop over my leters to make it a bit more fluid. Keep it up though. And I've only done one piece and just started my sketching so I'm very far from being an expert in these things.
     
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  17. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    dear- its hot. but you cold of faded the green to the brown better.
     
  18. ATE

    ATE Senior Member

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    whoa. i feel like a big toy right now lol, heres some shit i did with stocks.
    EDIT; Fk them bombs....lol allot of posts while high.
     
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  19. ShhImACop

    ShhImACop Member

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    ....wow...

    at least you are posting in the right section... Practice... ALOT

    and i dont know what you were trying to do but dont force feild (your green) around your entire letters