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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.
those are good but the 3D is a little sloppy.
Weird "haunted" house and roof-top with order
It was a good night, lastnight
akels, liking both your piece and that bink piece.
Exam-With that piece that you did on that abandoned house, IMO you should try running large 3d to make up for the letters being spaced out so much. Run the 3d down or to the bottom center of the piece. Nice bomb man.
Ayte-Clean as fuck. Looks real nice man. the colors you chose arent my cup of tea but nice nonetheless
ayte- i like that piece man its fresh
Nem- the M looks a bit like a M i think make the left leg of it a bit bigger.
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it's prob not the same one..
alien- simple, it looks like your using bars, not great bars but still bars, dont curve your letters yet, dont paint yet and dont put penises on the ends of your letters
aimr- take the extension off the bottom of the m and make the right leg of the r come out of the spine like this (R). the letters seem ok but they seem very rigid, dont be afraid to let them spread out
exam- your throwie isnt that good and its hard to make out unless you now what it says and you should work on your letters or do simples before you paint again
nem/sem- your m looks good on the first one but the first letter is hard to make out and their are too many extensions, strip it down. the baka is nice though, i would say to take of all the arrows though or at least the one on the k
akels- nice, i think you need to make the bottom of the l longer though and i think on bink's it should start thinner at the spine, it seems to thick, otherwise some nice stuff
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pretty wack, just tryin to work on can control. first painted peice in a long time, i need to paint alot more
alien- def drop the dicks man, sketch some more before you paint
aimr- nice and clean, solid letters
exam- not feelin the throw at all, the peice aint too bad. id say sketch some more to get your letters down though
nem- pretty fresh, just not feelin the extensions so much
feelin that SEY for sure but 3D needs to be cleaned up a lil
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a freestyle pieces
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had to crawl under a fence on a busy highway... it was scarry so i just said "fuck it" and did it
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I like but work on the K and that little end of the S.
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Try the blackbook thread.
bump any crits ?
and a new one
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oh fuck sorry man!
keane make all your letters the same width like the second one is real wack cuz of that A and the K sucks, the last one has a sexy fill tho, just keep at it!
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