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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. Narotik

    Narotik Member

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    yeah, I don't know. When I was coming up I saw shit from Dali and Escher and it just took me. I'm the kind of toy that don't care if you can read it and thick headed enough to stick by it, as long as it flows and looks good. Any crits tho? I mean, i think my can controls alright but rip it apart. Only way to get better right?
     
  2. bowchicabowow

    bowchicabowow Senior Member

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    what I get from looking at that is, you are a great artist, that just needs to better familiarize himself with spray paint and possibly different caps. Still looks nice. But it could use some cutbacks for crispness. It appears that you just painted it in layers without cutting back.
     
  3. Narotik

    Narotik Member

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    I did some cut backs on the highlights on the branches but your 100% right, this was from a year ago, I had no fucking clue what a cutback was at that point. I use spray paint all the time but only in layers so when I took it to a smaller canvas ( a sections of wall as thick as me) I was having some trouble. Yo, thanks for the compliment to. Anyone else? Anything I can use to help me, seriously, tell me its shit if you want just give me a reason why and how to fix it.
     
  4. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    i think it looks dope, and not everything has to be crisp clean, i think that misty look works pretty well.
     
  5. Narotik

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    Hey man, thanks. Anyone else?
     
  6. Narotik

    Narotik Member

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    Hey, what do I do when I find it easier to paint with a can than get my ideas down on paper. I mean I know a black book is what I need to get my shit straight, but it never comes out as ill as on the wall when I can put it all into perspective..I mean hell, I couldn't draw that shit if my life depended on it, it was all free hand.
     
  7. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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  8. freka

    freka Senior Member

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    looking good mate just need to work on can control and letter structure they also look very rushed just calm down abit mate other than that theyre good


    i realy fucked my n up i got lost and forgot where my outline was ment to go any tips for this ? also crits wuld be apreiceated


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  9. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    hahaha they are all rushed...i'm as paraniod as fuck when i bomb :)


    btw nice piece :)
     
  10. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Dude, one of em is in a bedroom...im pretty sure you had permission to do that. You should have at least taken your time on that one.
     
  11. respERATION

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    hahaha it took me just over an hour lol....i have the shittiest can control ever...

    ....i'm working on it
     
  12. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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  13. iVIBE

    iVIBE Senior Member

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    stunna those arent bad but your 3d is wack, work on making sure every 3d line matches the original line, if that makes sense.

    should look like this \\ not |\.
     
  14. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    oh yeah i know what you mean. shoulda took more time on that stuff. thanks.
     
  15. cans905

    cans905 Senior Member

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    stunna- i really like the 2nd one, especially how the y and r come together
    but to be honest, i really dont like the first one... it just has really poor structure and flow, and the fill isnt good either
    but yea, stick to the 2nd style
     
  16. JETPACK!!

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  17. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Im diggin the letters man, theres just a lil too much negative space on the E I think. I just think it would come together a lot better with a little less white right there. But other than that, Its got really good flow.
     
  18. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  19. 631

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    akel- dope

    rasek- lovin the style

    stunna- im feelin it but try one with a simple fill
     
  20. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    akel those hands are nice. keep it up.
    rasek keep fucking around with it.