i like that style awe.... pretty clean... if u made the 3d a little more detailed with shading itd look even better, and keep it on point, the S in the ages piece has some problems in the 3d... but overall its dope
Cheers man, I try to keep clear of s's, lol, and I'm having dificulty doing decent shading with these pens, 'stabilo pen 68' nice colours but they blotch to fook, I'm on 165gsm paper too, thort these pens would ease it a little seeing as they set me back 25 sheets for 15 :O maybe I should just stick to crayons
i like the cracked look problems i notice are the 3d as zook already said but it also looks like the mid rear curve of the s is on a different plane than the rest of the letters. overall i think its quite cool and clean tho keep it up bud
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koz. View attachment 564679 Rekt. colors on this look like shit View attachment 564680 Koz. the colors on this one look like shit too. View attachment 564681
he is not gonna listen to youu there is no point its like a big *face palm* yeo stop trying this nigguh wont listen he will tell you he cant help the flow that goes though his mind trust iv tried alot of us have its not gonna work
ok, get rid of the arrows. they look bad. smoothen out your lines and make it look more natural. the way your bars fold back at the ends of your T and F are atrocious. dont make the bars so dynamic in the sense of how they bend. the top of your E for example. make it more of a 90 degree angle on the inside. like a boring keyboard E. just until you get get angling down, a few times will help a lot. then you can go back and smoothen out the edges and bending it down to make it funkier. your letters arnt the worst ive ever seen. but theres tons of room for improvement if you seriously want to improve your letters rather than just coloring on paper then just do outline. in pen. no color. coloring just takes away time from more outlines you could be doing. if you sketch 15 outlines a day for a month, i can gaurentee you'll make more of an improvement in that one month than you have since you joined. once you get your boring simple lettering down than you can let loose an see what looks good and not. also, the top bar of your T shouldnt have the verticle inlines going through the horizontal bar. i wouldnt try and do characters and objects to replace letters yet. get all your letters on the same level. otherwise your gonna be stuck with a decent TFE and your Os gonna be boring and ugly ya know? hopefully that helps
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keep it up tofe, theres improvement in parts that needed it. raise the top bar of your T to make it a capital on the gray straight, make them all capitals for now. dont bother connecting the top bar of your F with the E. dont bother filling it. id say it was a decent stop in an hour the brown ones definatly the best. simple, but enough style to have a flow to it. outline just the outside of the letters, not the individual bars of the letter that brown straight isnt bad at all. take that simple and adjust the 90 angle of the bottom bar on the E make it smooth and have a curve upwards of prolly only 30 degrees if you know what im sayin? itll smoothen it out and add more style to it. the TOF isnt bad. add little hooks NOT ARROWS but hooks to the bottom of the top bar on your T on both sides. try it out and post it back up and we'll see how it looks bro