Try flipping the H, like this. It could be mistaken for a K like you have it. I liked that loop thing you were doing before, it needed work but it was original. [Broken External Image]:http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4544/hipe.png
back to the drawing board kid new letters everything ie. start over start over is a very succinct statement
Whats up guys, havent posted in a while, thought id share my re-worked throwie.. but crits first... Hipe, the H with the loop is dope, dont lose that. the rest of the letters are kinda plain though. id try working another loop in somewhere like the E, kinda balance it out y'know? Fake... stick to paper for a while man, wasting paint and giving yourself a reputation for throwing down junk early is a bad decision. work on general letter form, make the K look more like a K and work on clean lines, ect. Scam, the 3d is real clean, but i think both legs of the A needs to be more symmetrical, same with the M they look a little lopsided when compared to the S and the C. [Broken External Image]:http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5726/picture0017b.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4537/picture0018m.jpg
I don't like the S, but the rest is cool. Just make sure you don't cut off the bottoms, otherwise you'll just get used to it and never do them on walls.
I don't... I just don't like it. Furthermore, how fast can you write that and make it look good at the same time?