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def not feeling that tag 3s allright buth the r and d are pretty wack, dont over lap the r and turning it into a D you can do much better then that wilbur, Elbur nice change very original
3rd- Gotta agree with skina. The RD isn't matching up with the 3. Clean em up. The other guys on this page. Do some handstyles on graph paper and learn to keep your letters proportionate to each other and on a flat line. I need to take some of that advice myself. Haha. This name is giving me a little trouble. Crits?
Skeng, I feel as though your first two were your stepping stones and the 3rd you have begun to get things right. #3 looks a lot better, however I still think the 'N' needs some work as it looks a lot like an 'M' to me. Here's a few I've been 'toy'ing with..
If you don't think you're dope yet, then do the following: remove extensions (quotes, lines, all that), stick to keyboard letters, do them a million times.
tryin out a new style, tall and skinny. doesnt work to well with the chisel tip this small, going for more of the first pic type style
dumping old with new with not so new and not so old View attachment 604529 View attachment 604530 View attachment 604531 View attachment 604532 View attachment 604533 View attachment 604534 View attachment 604535 View attachment 604536 View attachment 604537
kilsr, nice, I like I like... family reunion: [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...48597062_100000507545549_788965_3621029_n.jpg and I'm only noticing that tall can right there next to the electrical box just now... wish i saw it then i would've racked it :\ [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.ne...71930383_100000507545549_788966_7185299_n.jpg
Noise I like the bottom tag, looks pretty good. That "Phaillius" or however you spell it, looks pretty good. Looks classsy. Crits please. Kthanxbai.
Hey i changed my name from raes since i found out somebody already took it so im frustrated trying to make another tag when i had a good one before kinda stuck any suggestions on anything wud be appreciated especially on flairs and connections thanks
I'll respect your choice of the name, though I wouldn't suggest the name 'Spray'. I'm sure someone else out there has the name, and you will probably having to end up changing again. Anyways, I'll give you some crits. First, the y extension, not feeling that. And maybe connect the 'p' together, so it really shows the p. I'm not going to cuss and say all this shit about the quotes, though some guys might not want those quotes there. Good luck.
spray - i like the S and the R on that tag, but i agree with kthanxbai about the name. I tagged spray just now on a bit of scrap paper, i cant make them flow that good so i cant really help. [Broken External Image]:http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/6653/img00237201104211721.jpg
@Unknown I dont really know about that fat "S" and small "EEK" Try making the letter proportional to each other.
saven, i dont mind any of your tags but they look like there lackin something, try slanting your letters to the left, and maybe even startin the letters small and progressively getting bigger
Ight guys. I`ll crit some more. Though please crit others if you expect crits. Lean - You need to make sure you can tell the L and the E. Cooqy - Not really a tag concept. More of a bombing concept in my opinion. Maybe try another style for that tag. The name`s got potential. Seek - Your S is good, I like it. Try keyboard letters, so keep your letters portional. Keep the EEK the same size as the S cause I really like that S. Saven - It`s looking OK. Like Shroomsh said, feels like it`s missing something. I really like the letters though, which is the best thing to hit, and you got it. Just fuck around with the tag, sometimes I listen to music and just grab the newspaper and just let the wrist go. Alright, now that I have critted 3 people here, and 1 person before, and gotten no crits back, I would appreciate crits! View attachment 22079 Kthanxbai.