word thanks for the crits a few pages back. much appreciated!

 

dar try a capital d with a lowercase a and r

 

Dar, you posted some that were pretty dope, but too many for me to point any of them out.

 

on the 4th DAR pic, diggin the one extreme bottom left.

edit: moreso the one right above it.

 

these are a lil sloppy but whatever

 

First one is mad dope. Just define that P a little more. Good shit though forreal

 

Exactly what Nouv said. Dope as fuck. Define that P though. The first one I thought it said Besoe.

 

word i see that the p looked like a b ill clean the p up .... tempo man quit wasting your time coloring and highlighting your stuff the letters need alot of work sorry but they all look horrible .

 

Tempo- listen to H1P3. work on letters instead of trying to to stupid fills.
Pesoe- i kinda like the bottom one better because mostly the P is better. imo. but there both sick. but then again nouv kills it with the throws so maybe just listen to him ahha

 

swee trowies

 

crits

 

arketek, nice throw, but r is bad, easily mistaken for c, give it a shot wit capital r.

 

two styles of throwies...
Tempo- quit trying to make it all bubbly n shit. i like that you took the advice to make it without color. now do simple letters instead of all this bubble shit

 

the r was a product of my laziness lol

 

mynips- the block throws are fresh!