Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image. Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them. Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
Yea i know but i dont even now how to do that 3d, so maybe some1 has some tips therefore. Tbs- Looking good, but the H is a lil bit bigger than the others, but overall it looks very clean. Beko- where is the V. But i like the connections.
very nice take at reach, i like it, the E is actually my least fav, i like that R. all personal taste i guess.
with colored pencils.... probally couldve done without the little extensions on the B and O but it just looked out of place on both sides because they were so flat. wells crits and tips please! i really like this tyle i just need to IMPROVE it!
sadgeh- PLEASE keep posting! Its been along time since someone who could benefit from advice has showed up. Keep yo mind open to critisism and apply. I try the best I can to do so but I still suck. Maybe you do better, good luck! - Dam dude this page turned out some burners aside from a few pix that lack worthiness glad I have'nt posted yet I think I'll wait til' next page lol Edit: <----- Previous page ma fault heh well time to get to sketchin then right?
exactly ribcage. tempo you cant tell the difference between whats good and whats not maybe thats why your not progressing man
i like it man, but maybe the U on tough and C on fuckers have little gaps of negative space that mess with the flow a little. if the left hand leg of the U kinda curved to the right at the top a little it might help. is really cool man, love the japenese symbol, if you added some oranges/yellows or other shades of red into the 3d it might look more like the magma core and be awesome.
maybe try raising the R up a little and have the top of the E go through the hole on the R if that makes sense? and bring the right leg of the R in a little
messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D. and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D any crits/suggestions appreciated
yes, dont fuckin triple post. said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck. Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread. I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.