Humor is that close 2 what you had in mind? .. these letters are sort of hard to work with.

 

The S in sweater is weird, and every letter is sorta based off of different sized bars, try keepin them the same. And for like A's and H's( or any letter with a bridge bar) Try to make the connecting bar the same width, it might look better. The sol's are tight bu its awkward in the colored one where the bars meet at the bottom of the S
Temb thats alreayd getting better keep working off of simps like that.
Not my usual style but i fux wit it. Exchange for naps
now that i look at it i realized i forgot the highlights on the PS. oops

 

Alright thanks.
And I really dig that naked.

 

nice SO, sol.

 

his SO is pretty basic really..
and thanks sol.
Oh yeah SOL try to use dead markers to do a fade for a fill, itll come out better

 

and?

 

Word I gotchu and I can never get the L to work. It's fucking awkward as shit, it always makes me want to change my name lol

 

tried to cut those letters up some. 2 much?

 

Yes, especially the B and the E.

 

no reason to try, dempo, you still gotta master them letters

 

word okay I'm gonna chill with all that extra ish for a bit and focus on straight letters.
thought i'd share this lil fill I did on it anyways tho so its not in vain.

 

Holy shit i am actually proud of myself for this one.. I like it alot.
But i would really appreciate crits, i know i just gotta work out some tweaks with the K.

 

you sketched that in green?

 

Yeah, I was doing the bars but then the green died, so i switched to blue

 

Only crit: the over bar, ontop of the A. It looks detached other than that, that sketch is great.

 

that A is weird and no me gussta lower case D's. me gusta the rest tho

did this in the dark 1st one in the dark
puttn this other one in here incase it don't stack up to them standerdddds

 

@Dank, Nice man, awesome 3D.

Here is one im actually decently happy with for a change.

 

yo naked i like that last one . just tubne up the a like metioned above .
and the . e-d connect . is nice ii like that . maby if u put the swirl in the eto d . in the a might make it flow better .
when im doin a piece i never put sometin in once . always in to places to try an keep things flow better

jus an idea . take it or leave it lol

 

Centrysams I know what you mean, I could try that out seems like a good idea to me. Thanks dank and rebel, it is detached. But i still feel all of the crits so thanks.
Dank- The highlights on the second one are tight and the subtle fade is nice...if it is a fade and not just lighting or something haha. But the connection on the top of the D bothers me, try cutting that out. Oh yeah and we have the same flannel...