@Bas I think the color scheme is throwing it off a bit. Don't take that the wrong way now though, because it's super clean and a damn good drawing. @Mues getting better my man, keep sketchin like dank said. Variation i did off of the last sketch.
@cred- i feel like ever since i said something about u doin the same simples over and over- u been bustin out some real nice work...keep it up man props
Thanks man, i have to agree with ya. Made me want to make my shit as perfect as possible before i post. also a less quality sketch for talk
Indeed! Try pinching the top of the C and D in... if that makes sense. I just wanna see how it looks. that color combo looks great.
Cred i like the purple one better. Those bars off the ends of the letters ruin it for me idk. oie_16194491VaqYdnZ not happy with the w but trying new things..
yeah i feel ya on that Norf. I like where you're going with that one. maybe on the W where the O leads into the middle bars make it connect to the left bar of the W (if you get what i mean). The extensions look nice though. Quick sketch from class today.
Fuck Cred i remember when you was doing simple and now you doing this crazy shit Please watch my video <3
hey cred, fix the middle part of your E. it kind of throws off the flow. You could also just shorten the line going across the middle for bar consistency. Gowj, if you got rid of the crazy color scheme, did that clean with a nice drop shadow, you'd be steezin yo
@Cred: Nothing's taken the wrong way. I appreciate the comments. And indeed, I think I went overboard with the amount of different colours. The scheme doesn't completely work. Also, the smoke shouldn't have been grey because it's hardly noticeable against the background, and therefore feels a little off. However, I still had no idea that I was going to do this for the background at that point. And as already has been said quite a few times before: your progression is fantastic and your dedication admirable. Great work.
Cred - the production process you had gone through dose not seem to be similar to what other guys try to do. mind explaining to us how you've been able to develope these ideas for a way to do this?
He listened to what motherfuckers said and put in work. He had a passion and he put some soul into this shit. And that's something we can all learn from.
@Dempo Basically what SOL said haha. I also would just do my best to understand what it is that makes a sketch look good, using terms like structure and flow is nice and all but you have to understand what those really are and how they can be applied to your letters. When i finish a sketch i take a good 15 minute cig break and during that i try to pick out every mistake i can see in it, then i go back and re-sketch the whole thing correcting those mistakes, then repeat, and eventually shit just get's to the point where you barely make any dumb mistakes and can actually start tweaking stuff to add some steez. Also take every single crit into consideration, even if you feel it's wrong it can't hurt to try. Hope that helps? For those who don't feel like reading the paragraph... A combination of good weed and my aderall prescription hah.
Now that is what I should do. Thank you. Gonna do that as soon as I finish my bacon burger. Also fuck adderall, I've been meditating to try and improve my focus. Any ideas on the R for the 3rd one? Cuz I fucked it up in the second.
@Sol Fuck i want a bacon burger. For the R on the third one, Use the same R as in the second but for the right leg try the same bar bend as you got on the bottom right of the Q. Might be worth a try flick for talk
cred, i love your C and E, so i suggest doing a bunch of lone R's and D's to progress. props on your progression though, i'm impressed