Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.
oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better
The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.
that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick. no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too
no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well EDIT: it;s like the blind leading the blind in here. before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site. Sep 2010 April 2012
no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol
no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r
ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more pictures
also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.