And this kids, is why you use pencils.

 

cool A. Try connecting it at the bottom right corner.

Little something. Nothing great.

 

I thought this gangsta cat watchin him was boutta fuckin mob on him, but then out of nowhere gangsta cat #2 suprise attacks the lil nigglet.

@acek step in the wrong direction, think about your proportions before you ink it.

@gpers steaz. up for a freestyle exchange or somethin hit me

 

good looks Gpers and 6i9o. heres another simple font I've been messing around with.

 

^^^^^^
im diggin the oldschool look, try to use more exciting colors next time and the shading on the bottom left corner of the A is a little weird. Go on youtube and watch style warz you'll get some good inspiration from it

 

blahh

 

drop the connection, and round the inside of the o, gettin there man haha

 

some weak poopy shit

 

cider ill def check it out n thanks for the crits

 

Kaze here's the colour wierd piece. As you can see I cracked it a little with it.lol.

These others are all just concept, play arounds.

 

your best is probably the last one, its got the most structure, the T L E are roughly the same size in bar width but the S and Y are well off, loose all the swirly bits and work on structure

 

eh

 

d look a little off, maybe bring down the right bar a little and make the bottom bar corve a little like the E. also, the top right of M extension looks funny. pretty fresh though, its got style.

 

Wolvf- those are interesting, the bottom 2 ones r prob the nicest ones out the 4, u should try doing some simpler stuff too and see how it goes.

dank looks cool, on the extension on the top right of your M maybe u should have made it more straight or used the same design of one of the extension on the bottom of ur M. kinda looks like u tryed using the same extensions you used at the bottom left of ur M but didnt turn out, i could be wrong though. i think the E is cool, with ur D maybe lose that dip u got on the mid bottom outside part

 

some new stuff..whatever tho

 

take a step back hombre and work out your letters and heights and bars

 

need some crits on my O and M

 

fix your E, lose the M extension, fix the middle and round the bottom of your O

unfinished...

 

thanks for the crits guys
and dank lovin that S on street