just practiced a few more times and this is what i got

 

Jesus that's a horrible handy

 

well thanks for the help a**hole

 

oie_2272842JJDBzcWv
Peace is just for fun, dont hate bro.

Orik- steezin dawg, try making the letters in like 1 or 2 lines instead of 4ish.

 

bump for comments/crits/concerns

 

it optik not orik.
i like the style but i cant read the second letter what is it

 

@kroe not much other than it all looks sick

 

dmgraff you should work more on ur letters, im not feelin ur ^tag at all

 

looks good kroe, those lower case g's you do are dope, you should keep working on that philly style lookin tag and try to perfect it and get it more fluent and shit. i like the bigger round styled tags u have too, there simple but nice.

DMgraff go alot more simple...dont try and go fast and think it will come out looking dope, any one can scribble really fast on paper, work on ur lettterrss and then you will actualy be able to scribble dope shit down. you dont just have it from the start...keep working at it man.

 

dmgraff - i thought it was orik too, bring the top bar of the T over the word rather than from the middle and out,
norf - dope!
kroe - sick shit, really like the big handy down the right side of each page,

 

^ this.

 

@ dmg tryed ur name hope its cool

 

any 1 wana do an exchange ??

 

norfsuthr that tag looks dope but it seems to get a bit congested half way through...it has flow though

save me id be down to do an exchange

 

@kaze

 

no paper streak

Gonna stop posting as much now.

 

those blue K's are dope saveme, looking good.

i should have practiced more but oh well, top 2 pics r one liners, i know the R in the bottom of the first pic is wak lol.

 

@saveme thanks man that looks sick but its optik not orik but i can fix that easy.

 

here 2 new one which one do you like better? took insperation from saveme's version.

te marker was running low on ink so not good lines too