thank you for correcting me.

 

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simple, clean as hell, got lucky i guess. 3d's is wak but i could care less

 

gesus those e's are fucking hot..your style reminds me of vegans..an sf writer. no beef

 

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Im New To Tha Site.. Please Crit My Pix So I Can Improve... ONYX*BXR*FB*Greazy Ent.

 

new style, 1st outline wit it

 

theres just something about your letters that i never seem to like man

i dunno

 

n onyx, tha 2nd once got potential, if ur diggin that style, work with it.

 

mase the stle is dope but the letters are really inthere.
not hard to read but im not sure what it is.

 

sall good, ima keep workin on it th0 maybe theyll come round 2 u

 

really feelin' the colours, and the E
keep it up

 

Mase, I Think U Forgot To Bring Tha 3D Out In Tha Top Of Tha "E" But Im Diggin It Still... Keep It Up!

 

MASE did you ever paint in the nashville Tn area?

 

eh who?

 

i hope you fucking kidding me art fag? what do you think graff is?

 

fuck you perk, you bit his shit and then you go and diss the homie... fucking fag.....

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shitty freestyle ULTRA sloppy

 

Still lookes dope to me Gesus

 

eyyyyyyyyy...you rock right back ;-)...i am off on a journey but when i return down hurr lets meet up in br with deriver...you seen his shirts? good lawd...............
................that fuckin graff giraffe.

serial bomber you bring it ill...
ges- dope as always (bows)

 

serial bomber stole his work...?

 

wonderful in the darkest most colourful sense