it would be nicer if the 3d came from the bottom instead of the left.

 

its ok!?

 

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posted this in the toy black books and got good feedback so i figured id put it in here...comments crits?

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its better than sum of the shit posted in here, keep drawin tho. if i were you i would try to add a little more roundness to ure letter structure, an make it look less stiff.

 

ill

 

PRETTY COOL U CAN GO ALONG WAY WITH THAT

 

not bad mly, give go to toy story

 

hi guys, it has beeeen a reallly long time since ive come back here, ive enjoyed a great summer and now i thought i should post up my improvement over the summer. ok, heres what i managed yesterday, i hope u all like it and pls feel free to comment, i would love to know how i am coming along with this and if theres something u do or dont like, pls mention that aswell. thank u all, and take care.
and as for the piece, it says YASI.
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yasl?

pretty interesting coloring concept

 

thanx split, remember me, we were going to have an exchange battle ages ago with Gesus in it aswell haha, too bad we never go to the end of it, ok anyways, as for my piece, thank u for ur comment and it says YASI, the last letter is I not L. thnx.

 

you boy sucks, keep that shit in toystory

 

good at drawing straight lines and designs
your pieces suck
bottom bomb pic is cool

 

hey PHARO, how come there is some arabic written on the fourth piece?

 

that yasi piece is off the hook man, the colors are a bif different but i like it...as for pharo id say take it to the toy story buddy

 

thanks

give go to toy story??

 

thanks a lot man, relly, thats the first time someone said off the hook to my piece haha, thank u very much, any more crits pls?

 

heres the whole completed version
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comments n crits still welcome

 

your 3d is really off in places and the coloring takes away from the structure of it