Lack of structure. I don't really feel any of the extensions either. That D is looking nice though. My two cents.
Little bit simplistic and lackluster A but whatever [Broken External Image]:http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9090/DSC00356.JPG
Sketch in progress, any ways to improve would be helpful. [Broken External Image]:http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/1959/DSC00357.JPG
the pencil letters are better. put those blue streak marks in the forcefield pointing in one direction. the a looks better in the pencil sketch than in the final product. i hope you don't actually write east...
if ya write east some fag is gona come by and wright west over and cross it out and ther ur gona go and cross west out etc... then you guy waste wall space with ur fag war... im on the east side... just thought u should no
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cr4ck, i think east is a sick word, whats wrong with it? both the first and second skectches are ill.
maniak, the lettering is sick, but maybe you should do your colors like slower or something because they look a little bit sloppy.