^ 3D's a little off, and I'm not a big fan of the handstyle. I'm not sure how I feel about the letters.
Like fury said, the 3d's off. Not a bad fill, but work on that shit you're trying to do with the color in the 3d. The extension that goes from the top of the S behind the whole thing down to the N is pointless. So is that one off the top of the E. Your IN look ok, but the S and E need some work. And your handstyle definitely does.
I'm digging the first E a lot, the second one is kinda rotated too much. I'm digging the fill though, along with the colors.
Yeah, nice colour scheme man! And it's petty, but maybe run the drip in the fill along the bar of the r rather than through the outline, nice tho
Not digging the K too much, but I like the H. The hole in the O seems kinda random, with a line for the R.
not bad. id suggest you not only in order to save paint but because of esthetical reasons to use the red as second outline and than here n there some black bubbles for background. get some bucket paint n roll the shit first. too much space between t and h...the r is weird and the s , i bet you see it. half of the 3d is fairly enough at least for me...
yeah i agree with everyone's crits on my paintin , i freestyle them all right now , cause i honestly want to learn control , and cuttin back , and outlinin real good before i get into goin crazy on pieces . sounds like an excuse but i just aint that good. i got about eight or nine gallons of white , but i'm too lazy to mix it and roll it on .i onlyused maybe half a tin on the red anyways so i'm over it.
SORRY FOR SIZE did this this afternoon.. fucked up a bit on the O and the R is a lil weird but other that its not to bad but thats just me.. crits? and SINE that piece is pretty dope.. but theres a few minor adjustments the one guy above a few posts said that you should follow
I don't really like any of the letters, the extensions are weird to me. It's like you're trying too hard or something, try some more simples.
yeah i can def. see where your comin from , i have done a second outline , and tried a third once or twice and it def. takes a lot more know how
simples bore me.. and look to dull.. so ive been trying to spice some shit up. but word ill scratch it and stat again haha all i know is my control with the can and my cleaness is coming quicker
Well, when you did try and "spice" shit up, it looked WACK. simples, *****'. I have to do them too, just like all the other toys on here.
imo i rather try different things when i go out and paint.. painting the same thing over and over again is boring.. changing it up all the time is how you get your style.. you find something you like and then you modify it to exactly how you think it should be.. im just trying to find the style i can get good at.. simples are boring and dull as i said. and learning different ideas is good too