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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. SECH

    SECH Senior Member

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    And I hate to rain on your parade SECH, but I'm not sure why everyone is biggin' that shit up. I must be in a bad mood or something but I see room for a lot of improvement. I know it's supposed to be SECH but all I see is SG(or A)ER, and a big ass empty space between the first and second letter. Not hatin', wicked style for sure, just wonderin' if I'm the only one that's got some crits on it.[/QUOTE]

    thanks for crits appreciate it ,it says saer though.
     
  2. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Sziv you should totallly revamp your hand
     
  3. gecko36

    gecko36 New Member

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    Geko

    Just got back into, so i thought posting here would be good for now.
     

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  4. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    Firstly, it blatantly says saer, and if you think it says sech, here's a link, http://www.specsavers.co.uk

    Secondly, you gave ghostwriter credit for copying wgones pic and writing bonkerssss after it,

    And geko: last one looks teal niice man, e's rockin
     
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  5. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    YEA i know
    im BALLin out goin bonkers so killlar like concreteits bangin

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  6. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    ghostwriter Senior Member

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  8. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    First day of pulling and stuff
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  9. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    That disturbed is mucho improvement on what iv seen from u bud, good shit! Sharpen it up with ink, and finish it off,
     
  10. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    Thanks, it's my favorite except for the B. Was my first time every writing a B.
     
  11. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    @ SECH. My bad, man. I had it up in my head you were writin' SECH 'cause the piece was four letters startin' with an 'S', haha. Like I said it looked like SG(or A)ER to me, so I should have realized you wern't writin' SECH. All good. Like I said, diggin' the style, but I still think you should do something about that space between the 'S' and the 'A'.

    @ DANGERI. As I said above, I saw SG(or A)ER in SECH's piece, so don't act like I can't read the shit with your "blantantly" comment, especially when SECH cleared it up for me already. Simple mistake mang. As for givin' ghostwriter credit, another simple mistake, I was in a hurry. Thanks for pointin' that one out though. I'll fix that shit up in a min..

    Aaaand, some critz for GHOSTWRITER: Awful... Sorry man, just my opinion. First off somethin' is horribly wrong with the main bar on your 'B'. Second, I'd get rid of the arrows or whatever's floatin' around - I don't think they contribute anything at all to the piece. Also, your 'S' is way too small. IMO it should be about the same size as the rest of the letters. Last but not least, something needs to be done with the flares you've got coming off your letters, especially the 'E'. My advice would be to curve some of the lines throughout the piece to give it more shape as a whole, then to try and pull the flares in a way that contributes to the flow of the piece's shape. As far as your bubble letters go, I'm not very good at those, but I know what you've got goin' on there isn't workin' at all. I don't mind the 'A' though.

    @ EXI. Keep it up mang. Along with pulling the length of the bars, trying pull the width and tapering them.

    @ GECKO. I like what you've got goin' on there. My advice would be to work on your 'G's though. They don't seem up to par with the rest of your letters.

    @ MOGAN. That shit is dope. No critz from me, haha.
     
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  12. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    What do you mean by tapering with them?
     
  13. aekone

    aekone Senior Member

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    May sound kinda lame but I made my own alphabet. Based on the english alphabet of course. I just thought it'd be cool to make one. So then I decided to make a piece with that same alphabet. It's funny because this is the best piece of graff I've ever done.
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    Translates to Chuke by the way.
     
  14. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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  15. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    nova. fresh simps an cool chracter
     
  16. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    Tapering means makin the letters bigger to skinner...bendin them and shit. i think....i dont know, too blazed. aand yo kew, im diggin that e.
     
  17. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Redeyes it kinda looks like NOYA
     
  18. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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  19. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    Uhm, the easiest way I can explain tapering would be a triangle.
    Going from one width to another...
    Doesn't have to go to a point though.
     
  20. *Patch!

    *Patch! Senior Member

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    kew1 the only good letter is the E... and just going by what you've posted in the past, im going to guess its bitten