Here, this more to your liking? Sorry for the crap quality, had to hold the comp and the notebook and press the goddamn button haha [Broken External Image]:http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9785/swimthrow.png
does my shadowing still need work? [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0650.jpg swim: make the lines in the m and w longer...
The shadow is good on the bottom but its not correct at the top. Try more of this. I fixed it up and added a few things here and there...
I need crits/help on my throwies these were both done in less than 2 mins in pen so yeh stuck - i like that throwie, but in the E i reckon u shud just put one line through so it flows better con- decent throwie but i guess its lacking flair especially since u only have 3 letters to work on
faser make ur letters the same size they get bigger and bigger or at least in that second one they do
con - on your n add a little curve to the bottom instead of a straight line bezar - dont put that thing on your B [Broken External Image]:http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6154/pictures018w.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/pictures018w.jpg/1/w320.png URL=http://img43.imageshack.us/i/pictures020h.jpg/][Broken External Image]:http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7798/pictures020h.jpg[/URL][Broken External Image]:http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/pictures020h.jpg/1/w320.png
nmm that first one... the a is clean man. Stuck- shits good. just i feel the lines are a little sloppy. keep doin over and over and over til its burnd into ur brain n flows right outta u.. but ima say keep it the way it is. posted few days ago n got dissed.... i desided i realie am happy with the SAW, i have a good f.. just fucked this one up.. but ive gone threw so many fucking T's and can not find one to fit this style.. can any one help me out please? id really appreciate it
Im not trying to be mean but that shit sucks! Its not in proportion. The S is basic, but why did you get huge when it came to the W. You cant see a T there at all. If your gonna do a T you need to show both sides. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just trying to help you out. The S and the F are the only basic letters. I know this might sound harsh but when you get better and look back on this your gonna understand. I know my throw sucks but I tried your name.....
this was my first time out in 6 or 7 months n i drew it out like 30 min before. n i did it in like 20 min on a hot as fuckin spot 2 am, pitch dark... trust me, it looks like i suck. but thats not my origonal shit. its also the first time i spelt it SAWFT. all my other premeditated shit is soft. the shit i already worked out the kinks.. so give me credit and take the enviorment and new letters... n a little bit of booze.. into concideration... imma post the origonal drawing and show u what the W was sposed to look like. but yea man, what u drew actually really helps cuz i dig that style. it cool if i kinda work from it?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ soo this is what i drew 30 min before we got to the spot (remember i was tipsy lol so im really not that bad) hopfully ull see what i was tryin to get at. though still a terrible sketch. drew it with cell phone light in a car
Dude... no excuses. Everytime anyone on here sees a flick of a bomb, we are already taking all that shit into consideration. Besides paper and legal walls, there is no such thing as the perfect or normal environment for writing. Everytime you go out crazy shit is going down and there is always something to hamper your ability to paint.
no im sayin i pretty much stoped drawing graf for that long in general.. they are excuses. but any one that stops for a min has to get there barrings back.. but u think the paper is more a reasonable consept than the wall?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ tryin to find flix of my old shit with SOFT n all i could find is my shortned toss n this flick is actually the first time i painted the SO lol. i gotta go out and get flix of all my shit i took time on but i dig my s for the SO... im just to lazy to think up a F n T
Black flag just said it all... No excuses. I think big blue violence Posted it before but It went something like this. "No one see's "drunk as fuck" or " First time out" and thinks oh there better now." If you havent drawn in awhile dont go out and paint its a simple as that. Go ahead and get some ideas off my letters where all here to help each other. I Got bored waiting for work so i threw this together, The face is gay... I know. Done with oil pastel.
oh yea, i didnt expect to go out n crush it first time out in a while. i was just goin for the fun n the rush n to get my barrings back. just so im not just talking heres another old SOFT throw i was doin for a while
yea its not that hard to tell homeboy.. only thing hard to grasp is the attachment on top of the o... dont talk shit then not post what u got.... ANY WHOOO weakfingers. i actualy changed it up so im not usein your throw. but i really liked your A and W, n im goin to paint in a few min. imma throw it up n post later... thanks alot bro.
lol, if you were to check back a few pages i posted like 2 throws, which aren't too good, but they definitely kick the shit out of that throw in particular.